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		<title>Which Subject Line Won?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 14:08:49 +0000</pubDate>
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Email is a funny thing.
You can spend hours writing a well-thought out sales email&#8230; only to see it flop. And you can kick out something in minutes that creates a buying frenzy.
Naturally, your subject line plays a huge role in whether your email even gets opened. And, in theory, this also affects your sales.
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<p>Email is a funny thing.</p>
<p>You can spend hours writing a well-thought out sales email&#8230; only to see it flop. And you can kick out something in minutes that creates a buying frenzy.</p>
<p>Naturally, your subject line plays a huge role in whether your email even gets opened. And, in theory, this also affects your sales.</p>
<p>With that in mind, let&#8217;s play a little game. You read the two subject lines below, and then see if you can pick which subject line won. Got it? Okay&#8230;</p>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #1: <strong>Long-Shot Leads to Unexpected Win</strong></li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #2: <strong>China tells U.S. to &#8220;go straight to hell.&#8221;</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Just to give you a little bit more background on these emails, both were sent to a house list of folks interested in trading. Both sold the same product at the same price. And both &#8220;piggy-backed&#8221; on news events.</p>
<p>The first email piggy-backed on the 2009 Superbowl. The second email piggy-backed on China&#8217;s move to unload the fraudulent derivative products sold to them by U.S. banks.</p>
<p>So both had tie-ins to events that would have been top of mind for most traders.</p>
<p>Alright, have you made your decision?</p>
<p>Good, let&#8217;s move forward.</p>
<p>Here are the open rates for each email:</p>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #1: 741 opens</li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #2: 1,434 opens</li>
</ul>
<p>Did you guess right?</p>
<p>Well, maybe you did and maybe you didn&#8217;t &#8212; <em>but you actually don&#8217;t know yet.</em></p>
<p>That&#8217;s because open rates are a relatively <span style="text-decoration: underline;">meaningless metric</span>. Think of print advertisements. You don&#8217;t care how many people read your headline; you care about how many people actually <em>buy</em>.</p>
<p>Fortunately, this particular client took my recommendation to buy some simple (and affordable) <a href=" http://www.1shoppingcart.com/app/?af=1062719">ad tracking software</a>.</p>
<p>We use this software program to track the open rates and sales of every email we send out. (We also <a href=" http://www.1shoppingcart.com/app/?af=1062719">track ads by source</a> so we know when our advertising dollars are working and when they&#8217;re not.)</p>
<p>Because we track emails like this, I can tell you that the real winner was Subject Line #1 &#8212; and NOT Subject Line #2 as you probably guessed.</p>
<p>Here are the numbers:</p>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #1: Long-Shot Leads to Unexpected Win &#8211; 741 opens, 17 sales</li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>Subject Line #2: China tells U.S. to &#8220;go straight to hell.&#8221; &#8211; 1,434 opens, 9 sales</li>
</ul>
<p>If you&#8217;re paying close attention, <strong>the first email got about <em>half</em> as many opens&#8230; but&#8230; almost double the sales!</strong></p>
<p>This real-life example proves that while your subject line matters &#8212; and you should always aim to get your emails opened &#8212; a high open rate does not necessarily guarantee a greater number of sales.</p>
<p>And while this example may be appear to be an anomaly, I promise you: it isn&#8217;t. I&#8217;ve seen this same story played out a number of times.</p>
<p>I have a theory about this.</p>
<p>There are people on every email list who will <em>never</em> buy. They&#8217;re either freebie seekers or they&#8217;re just not interested in what you have to offer. This is a fact.</p>
<p>Unfortunately, we tend to think that everybody on a list is a potential buyer&#8230; and so we try to write for the list.</p>
<p>This is a mistake because &#8220;the list&#8221; doesn&#8217;t buy. Individual people on the list do.</p>
<p>So when you write emails, try to imagine your ideal buyer. Write to <em>that</em> guy. And don&#8217;t worry about all the non-buyers &#8212; they&#8217;re never going to buy anything anyway.</p>
<p>Said another way, don&#8217;t focus on maximizing attention; focus on maximizing sales. Don&#8217;t write to the list; write to the <em>latent buyers</em> on the list.</p>
<p>Making this simple mindset shift could make a massive difference in the results you get from your email marketing.</p>
<p>-Ryan M. Healy</p>
<p>P.S. How do you know which emails are really working and which ones aren&#8217;t? And how do you know which ads are worth running again? Well, you can&#8217;t really know &#8212; <em>unless</em> you <a href=" http://www.1shoppingcart.com/app/?af=1062719">track your ads by source</a>.</p>
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		<title>7 Ways to Get Your Email Opened</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Nov 2008 18:21:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ryan M. Healy</dc:creator>
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It&#8217;s rare that I receive any kind of new or noteworthy email. Most of them all look and sound the same. I imagine your inbox looks the same as mine.
That&#8217;s why one of the biggest challenges in email marketing (just like direct mail) is figuring out
How to Get Your Email Opened!
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<p>It&#8217;s rare that I receive any kind of new or noteworthy email. Most of them all look and sound the same. I imagine your inbox looks the same as mine.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s why one of the biggest challenges in email marketing (just like direct mail) is figuring out</p>
<h3>How to Get Your Email Opened!</h3>
<p>You have two snippets of text to work with: your name and your subject line.</p>
<p>Personally, I believe the most valuable of the two is <em>your name</em>.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s why&#8230;</p>
<p>If you deliver valuable content to your readers&#8230; and you develop a relationship with them&#8230; they will actually WANT to read everything you send them.</p>
<p>They will open your emails and read them because they know you, like you, and trust you. And they trust you will continue to deliver the kinds of content you&#8217;ve developed a REPUTATION for delivering.</p>
<p>Now, a name can be an asset or a liability. If you abuse your reader&#8217;s trust&#8230; and you abuse it repeatedly&#8230; she will unsubscribe. Or worse, she will bad-mouth you in public forums whenever the subject of email marketing comes up!</p>
<p>So, as much as possible, build trust. Become known for delivering value. Treat your name as an asset. Build relationship equity. If you are in this for the long-term (and you&#8217;re not just &#8220;churning and burning&#8221; your prospects), then this strategy will be <em>very</em> effective for you.</p>
<p>And this brings me to</p>
<h3>Email Subject Lines</h3>
<p>What subject lines work best? What should you avoid?</p>
<p>Well, I can&#8217;t speak for all markets, but I can tell you some things that have worked well for me.</p>
<p><strong>1. Be provocative.</strong></p>
<p>Whenever I put some emotion into my subject lines or write something unexpected, my emails get more attention.</p>
<p>Example: &#8220;3 Signs You Should NOT Be a Copywriter&#8221;</p>
<p>Since I am a copywriter&#8230; and I have an ebook about how to get clients as a copywriter&#8230; this is definitely an unexpected subject line. As a result, it got a high open rate.</p>
<p><strong>2. Make it look personal.</strong></p>
<p>A quick caveat: Deceptive subject lines are illegal. So do not try to trick your readers. That&#8217;s a no-no.</p>
<p>Still, I think making email look personal is a good strategy for getting emails opened &#8212; so long as the strategy is not over-used.</p>
<p>Example: &#8220;re: copywriting clients&#8221;</p>
<p>When I used this subject line, a reader told me re: means &#8220;reply,&#8221; and as such was deceptive because the email wasn&#8217;t a reply.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d never heard this before. I always thought re: meant &#8220;regarding.&#8221; It is used all the time in print letters. &#8220;Re: Your Recent Purchase&#8221; or whatever.</p>
<p>No matter whether you choose to use Re: or not, the principle still holds. Personal emails get opened more often. You could just use lower case letters and that might be enough. Or you might say something like &#8220;hey, need your advice&#8221; if you&#8217;re conducting a survey.</p>
<p><strong>3. Use the word &#8220;Download.&#8221;</strong></p>
<p>This may sound weird, but in test after test, anytime I start a subject line with the word &#8220;Download,&#8221; I get a ton of opens.</p>
<p>Example: &#8220;Download Ben Settle &amp; Ryan Healy Interview&#8221;</p>
<p>If you have a PDF report, audio recording, or video to offer your list, use the word Download. If your experience is anything like mine, it will improve your open rates.</p>
<p><strong>4. Mix things up.</strong></p>
<p>In #2, I suggest making your emails look personal. The trick is to avoid over-using this strategy.</p>
<p>Most of the time, I like to use clear subject lines with Initial Caps.</p>
<p>Example: <a href="http://www.ryanhealy.com/how-to-write-with-authority/">&#8220;How to Write with Authority&#8221;</a></p>
<p>Simple. Straightforward. And it works.</p>
<p>But over time using the same subject line format can cause your readers to become blinded by familiarity. Which is why I like to change things up every now and again.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s when I will use lower case letters or ask a question or throw in some symbols.</p>
<p>Example: &#8220;am I crazy for doing this?&#8221;</p>
<p>If I&#8217;ve been sending out emails such as the first example (How to&#8230;) and then I send out something like this, it will get much more attention.</p>
<p><strong>5. Issue a command.</strong></p>
<p>Instead of trying to gain your reader&#8217;s interest, it&#8217;s good to occasionally issue a command. Again, this works well only if you don&#8217;t over-use it.</p>
<p>Example: &#8220;urgent message (open immediately)&#8221;</p>
<p>Obviously, I can only say something like this a few times a year. Not everything is urgent. But when something <span style="text-decoration: underline;">is</span> genuinely urgent, issuing a command is often better than using a promise-based subject line.</p>
<p>And if you don&#8217;t have something urgent, you can still issue a command. For instance, one of my most-read blog posts simply said, <a href="http://www.ryanhealy.com/you-have-to-read-this-now/">&#8220;You Have to Read This Now.&#8221;</a></p>
<p>I gave no indication as to WHY my reader needed to read this&#8230; or even WHAT he was going to read about. And yet it still commands (demands?) the reader to take the action you request.</p>
<p><strong>6. Tell a story about yourself.</strong></p>
<p>Anytime I use a story about myself, I get higher open rates. Of course, it has to be interesting and relevant to my readers.</p>
<p>Example 1: &#8220;33 Things I Learned in 2006&#8243;</p>
<p>Example 2: &#8220;How I Achieved a 7.14% Conversion Rate&#8221;</p>
<p>Everybody loves a good story.</p>
<p>By inserting yourself into the subject line with the word &#8220;I&#8221; you naturally tap into your reader&#8217;s curiosity &#8212; and his desire to read a good story.</p>
<p>Notice that there are two things at work here. I&#8217;m promising a story <em>and</em> a learning opporunity at the same time.</p>
<p><strong>7. Make a compelling offer.</strong></p>
<p>Back in May 2008, I ran a special offer centered around my birthday. I sold a copy of a physical book for $7. And that price <em>included</em> shipping.</p>
<p>This offer sold 85 books and generated a couple upsells on the back end. The two subject lines I used were:</p>
<p>Example 1: &#8220;My Birthday Is This Week &#8212; Here&#8217;s a Gift for You&#8221;</p>
<p>Example 2: &#8220;Save a Back: Buy a Book&#8221;</p>
<p>The trick is to make your offer compelling. That&#8217;s the first goal. Then, if possible, make it fun. Give a reason WHY you&#8217;re making the offer (i.e., it&#8217;s your birthday).</p>
<h3>Win 1,000 Gallons of Gas?</h3>
<p>Now, most corporate email is boring and completely fails as a direct response medium. But today I was pleasantly surprised by an email USAA sent to me.</p>
<p>Subject: Enter the 1,000 Gallons of Gas Sweepstakes.</p>
<p>Here they have combined two of the elements I discussed above. They are issuing a command (&#8220;Enter&#8221;) and making a compelling offer (a chance to win 1,000 gallons of gas).</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s a screenshot of the email:</p>
<p><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-208" title="Win 1,000 Gallons of Gas Email" src="http://www.ryanhealy.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/11/1000gallonsemail.png" alt="1000gallonsemail 7 Ways to Get Your Email Opened" width="500" height="542" /></p>
<p>As far as corporate emails go, this one is really good.</p>
<p>They&#8217;ve got a clear, compelling offer. They&#8217;ve got a deadline. And they&#8217;ve got a call to action.</p>
<p>What&#8217;s more, they&#8217;re tapping into the internal conversation many Americans have had about high gas prices.</p>
<p>Not bad!</p>
<p><strong>The bottom line: </strong>Email marketing can be both powerful and profitable if you do it right.</p>
<p>What tips and advice do you have?</p>
<p>-Ryan M. Healy</p>
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