After reading my post about Internet Marketing on Life Support, a reader sent me a private email. He writes:
As copywriters do we (as a profession) play a part in the current situation? People buy (are lured) into bad situations with these scammers based on what they read on the sales page… which nine times out of ten is written by a copywriter. (A high level IM “goo-roo” is going to go to a high level wordsmith to create the most persuasive sales letter possible.)
Are we guilty of creating the hype by virtue of what we write?
Do we as a profession need to be more conscientious about who we do business with? Should we be asking for proof that the client can provide the backup to the persuasive story we create?
Would love to hear your opinions. Love the blog and keep up the good work.
I must confess: I’ve had similar thoughts myself. How much responsibility do copywriters share for the current state of Internet marketing — and advertising in general?
Certainly, copywriters have helped the market along. Copywriters have stoked the fires of desire. Copywriters have helped sell products of dubious value.
But are copywriters to blame?
Well, here’s my perspective:
Scenario #1: Client Defrauds Customers
If I write copy for a product that is still in development, the client uses my copy to start taking orders, and then fails to deliver the product to his customers… that’s not my problem.
Certainly, I’d be upset if this happened to me. But it’s beyond my control. I can’t know in advance whether or not my client is going to follow through with product creation and fulfillment.
Obviously, the best thing to do in this case is to stop writing for a client like this once you discover his true colors.
Scenario #2: Client Lies to the Copywriter
If I use a client’s story to help make the sale, but my client has lied about his story, then that is not my problem.
The reader asked if we should be asking for proof of what a client tells us. In theory, it sounds like a good idea. But it’s hard to put into practice.
First of all, there has to be an element of trust between the copywriter and the client. If this trust isn’t there to begin with, then that’s a problem.
Secondly, what kind of proof could a client offer to prove his story?
Assume for a moment I was your client, and I told you that I began my freelance copywriting career on June 13, 2005. How would I prove that to you? It’s not like I have a notarized letter saying that that’s the day I began freelance copywriting.
Anyway, my point is that you have to trust your clients and that they’re telling you the truth. It’s a requirement for a good business relationship. And most life experiences don’t come with supporting documentation — so it would be hard to prove a client’s story anyway.
Scenario #3: Business Shenanigans
If I write sales copy that accurately reflects the product I’m selling, but there are shenanigans going on behind the scenes (for instance, affiliates not being paid, speakers not being paid, lawsuits between partners, etc.), that’s not my problem either.
My job as a copywriter is to write copy that sells without being deceptive. Half the time, clients intentionally keep copywriters in the dark about problems happening inside the business.
I’ve experienced this firsthand. It wasn’t until later — sometimes much later — that I discovered the extent of the problems.
Again, the best thing to do when you discover there are unethical business practices is to simply move on. (For extra credit, you might want to privately warn other copywriters about the bad apples you’ve had the misfortune of dealing with.)
Scenario #4: Willful Promotion of Crap
If I write sales copy for a product or service that I know up front is crap… or if I write copy for a client who I know in advance is neither honest nor ethical… then that is definitely a problem. In a way, this makes me an accomplice.
Of course, every copywriter is going to have a different definition of “crap” and “unethical.” For instance, I have personal beliefs that inform what I think is good, bad, etc. But everybody’s moral compass has a slightly different true north.
What I consider bad, another copywriter may consider good. And vice versa. The key, I think, is to only promote products or services you believe are genuinely valuable to the target market.
What Do You Think?
At the end of the day, copywriters are hired guns. We’re hired to complete a specific task: write persuasive sales copy.
We have a measure of control over what products we’ll promote and which clients we’ll work for. But what the client chooses to do after the copy is written is really out of our control.
What do you think? Leave a comment below and let me know.
-Ryan M. Healy




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RE: @healymonster I think an acceptable analogy is the gun shop owner.
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The whole ball of wax is simple for the copywriter. I only take on projects I believe in, and can get excited about. Then it is my duty to sell it the best I can, in its honest, but “best looking” light. I fact-check it the best I can against my creative brief, but in the end, it's up to the product owner to make sure the facts are in compliance.
Well said, Ryan. Sadly, I've encountered too many marketers and copywriters who have fallen in love with “situational ethics.” Quite often I've thought, “If they'd put as much effort into creating more genuine value as they do in trying to convince others that what they're doing is okay – they'd have a terrific offer.” It's a bit like those clever criminals we sometimes see in the news, and collectively we think, “Man, if they'd put their mind to being honestly productive, they could have achieved even greater success.” You can dupe people once. It's increasingly difficult to dupe them again. The law of diminishing returns kicks in at some point.
I think an acceptable analogy is the gun shop owner.
Does the gun shop owner take responsibility if one of their guns was used in the commission of a crime? No. But there are limits, and there are steps to take that, if neglected, can make the copywriter somewhat responsible.
For example, let's take the scenarios you indicated:
#1: Clients who defraud:
Just as the gun owner doesn't know how their guns will be used, we don't know how clients will use our copy. We're copywriters, not psychics. Gun shop owners do background checks, just as copywriters use questionnaires. Which is why I think copywriters who don't do any due diligence are partly responsible. It makes them, to some degree, complicit. (Complicity through negligence, in this case.)
#2: Clients who lie:
As I said earlier, gun shop owners do background checks. But with identity theft and fraud being as rampant as it is, how can we prove the information we're given is legit? And if the gun was purchased using fraudulent information, the gun shop owner is not liable. (Of course, provided the gun shop owner proved he carried out proper due diligence.)
#3: Shenanigans:
What if the gun buyer provides legit documentation and information, but has current personal issues we don't know of? Issues not found during a standard background check? Such as recent psychological problems? Or recently fired from their jobs? Or anger management issues? Well, it's ditto as #2. We're copywriters, not psychics — much less lawyers carrying out discoveries. However, as you suggested, we might want to start asking for references or even do credit checks. I know of some copywriters who do this.
#4: Willful Complicity:
That's a non-issue. It's no different than a gun shop owner who willingly sells to a known criminal (or to someone who's clear about what the gun is intended for). However, I think there's a difference between moral, unethical, and illegal.
Illegal: the gun is going to be used to commit a crime.
Unethical: the gun is used for self-defense, but is stored in a poorly locked location in a house filled with kids.
Immoral: the gun is used to hunt. (This might be considered immoral by vegetarians, for example.)
All three are different. The third is pretty black and white. The second a little less. But the third is definitely a gray area. The mroe black and white it is, the more complicit the copywriter is or should be.
But that brings me to the point:
A gun shop owner who skips a background check, or sells guns on the black market, or ignores tell-tale signs (i.e., the buyer appears drunk or high on drugs, for example) are definitely in the wrong.
Or more loosely, bad gun shop owners will attract bad clientele, for we attract who we are. So while any one of the above scenarios, which may happen once or twice in a copywriter's career, is forgivable, if it happens more often than the norm, then I think the copywriter is just as complicit.
Because he is attracting who he is.
Ryan, I think you summed it up best when you said “write copy that sells without being deceptive”. Positioning something so it appeals to its best customer is actually doing that customer a favor, if the product has a high perceived value to him.
Meanwhile, it's up to the client to give you all the info you need to work with, when asking you to write a sales letter. It's not up to you to check out that information and their background and business practices, piece by piece – that *would* be over-reaching your responsibilities! But if something doesn't feel right (and I think all copywriters do experience those vibes sometimes, when talking to potential customers), it's only common sense to check it out more thoroughly… and/or pass.
That being said, your Situation # 1 as we all know nailed the late great Gary Halbert and netted him jail time – writing a letter for a product that never got delivered. The words “due diligence” come to mind; and copywriters, of course, have to practice that.
The bottom line, though? Copywriting is not so much about ethics as about law. What is a copywriter's legal responsibility? After that, your ethics are your own; just make darned sure you live up to them. That's my take.
And now, 'scuse me… I gotta get back to work. Thanks for the mind-break.
Ryan, I think you summed it up best when you said “write copy that sells without being deceptive”. Positioning something so it appeals to its best customer is actually doing that customer a favor, if the product has a high perceived value to him.
Meanwhile, it's up to the client to give you all the info you need to work with, when asking you to write a sales letter. It's not up to you to check out that information and their background and business practices, piece by piece – that *would* be over-reaching your responsibilities! But if something doesn't feel right (and I think all copywriters do experience those vibes sometimes, when talking to potential customers), it's only common sense to check it out more thoroughly… and/or pass.
That being said, your Situation # 1 as we all know nailed the late great Gary Halbert and netted him jail time – writing a letter for a product that never got delivered. The words “due diligence” come to mind; and copywriters, of course, have to practice that.
The bottom line, though? Copywriting is not so much about ethics as about law. What is a copywriter's legal responsibility? After that, your ethics are your own; just make darned sure you live up to them. That's my take.
And now, 'scuse me… I gotta get back to work. Thanks for the mind-break.
Really great analogy, Michel! Thanks for adding to the discussion.
Also: I like your distinction between moral, unethical, and illegal. I may write more about this later.
Ryan
P.S. Edited your comment in paragraph that begins “All three are different.” I think you meant “The first is pretty black and white.”
Hunting immoral? You've got to be kidding me. I'd be more accurate to say that hunting to feed your family is not immoral, but hunting for the pleasure of seeing how many you can get of something without regard to those that also want to hunt, that's immoral. In other words, over hunting, and you can include over fishing in this, is the immorality, not the act itself.
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Great analogy Mr Fortin and good post Ryan. But what about the gunshop owners who DO use their own guns ileagally? And then train others in the same manner?
There is a person with a legendary rep we all know offering a $600 something in free products but when you signup w email you discover that it is a required paid membership. And that wasnt clearly explained BEFORE the email signup.
Now this guy is a copywrighter and leads the field. And he is doing something questionable and thus others following him may do the same thing.
I know it is not directly related to the main post here but as good a time as any to bring up sir.
That's what happens when you touch-type and respond very quickly, without editing, lol!
Kevin, you missed my point. “Hunting” may be considered immoral to a vegan or vegetarian. Not to everyone. And that's my point — morality is different for everyone, as Ryan pointed out.
You're right about the obligations to the “employer,” but you also have obligations to the reader (target). People take the copywriter “at their word” about the product/service. You say it's the greatest thing since the Microwave, and we tend to believe you. So, if you have any notion that it's really a piece of c–p, you shouldn't do the ad. The same way if the product or service is below average, don't try to make us think that it's better.
People have a cynical attitude towards advertising and marketing, because for too long that's exactly what copywriters did. It caused the prevalent idea that “Advertising makes us by things we don't want.” The truth is that Advertising does no such thing. It can do only one of two things. 1) Make us aware of a solution to a class of problems we didn't know existed. 2) Make people believe a solution exists, where it doesn't really. The first is both legal and ethical (usually), while the second is neither (always).
I say the first is unethical, when it draws a group's attention to a solution to a problem that they are unable to solve properly. For example, selling stock picking programs to the general public. Most people don't have money to lose, and little inclination to actually determine the truth of the offered program. The truth being that few if any can deliver on their promises, for any length of time.
I think another point worth looking at is the past behavior of the client. If you have first hand or verifiable information about the shady antics of the client, that's part of the picture too. The old-fashioned military based concept of “just following orders” isn't really that enlightened nor is it an excuse. A hired gun is just as culpable as anyone else in the process if they are aware of what's going on, or frankly could have been aware if they had bothered to not look the other way for the sake of the dollar. So many internet marketers will pitch their ideas as good because “it works”, morals be damned. That's just not good enough anymore, IMO.
Depending on their personal and professional ethics, copywriters can choose how they deal with situational ethics. Except when an outright fraud becomes well publicized, copywriters remain behind the curtain. The question is how you want to conduct business and sleep at night. Because of anonymity, I am sure more than one copywriter has been tempted to take on a questionable situation.
In professional sales, my situation has been very different. You are the face for the company you represent. I have commented that when I make a sales call, all I really have when I walk in is my reputation and creditability. Just like in copywriting, it is reputation and creditability that you are trying to establish and build on to make the sale. If the sale goes sour regardless of the reason, it is the sales person that they will remember. And believe me, they will remember. I did a large six figure deal and the company was almost 6 months late delivery the software to the client. Years later, I bumped into the project manager and he remembered me.
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Your scenario #4 reminds me that as a copywriter it sometimes seems like I'm selling feelings instead of products and this has weighed on me at times, even though the product isn't crappy.
Does the world really need another product about X? Or is it just part of the never-ending festival of hype where we point people to the newest shiny thing rather than encouraging them to use their own resources (i.e. encouraging Ralph Wolves instead of Sam Sheepdogs :-)?
The upside is that it's possible for a copywriter to have a positive impact in a marketing campaign, even if the product isn't all that necessary or is even borderline crappy.
Also, I've taken encouragement from what Brian Eno said last year in an interview about how he works with U2 in the studio: “'They feed on their own excitement… the point is to keep offering ladders that people can climb up to another place and then you can throw the ladder away afterwards, it doesn't matter.”
So even if it seems like we're selling feelings or it's not the greatest product in the world, as long as it's a ladder, then that's OK.
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@michelfortin Thanks for that insight Michel. Also dug your comment to @healymonster about http://ff.im/-iPKZE
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Great discussion! I disagree with Marya on “Copywriting is not so much about ethics as about law. What is a copywriter's legal responsibility? After that, your ethics are your own.” For me, being an ethical business owner means I want to work with ethical clients. When I get a copywriting inquiry, I send back a standard response that outlines several reasons why I might turn down a job: values at odds with my own, crappy product, etc.
To me, the freedom to do that is crucial.
I have also started jobs for clients and then had red flags go off. I remember telling a client with a book of essays that I was pretty sure one of the essays was not hers, and explaining the rules of plagiarism. Another time, I called up a long-time client and said that he was putting both his doctoral and his masters' degrees (in theology, no less)–both of which I'd assisted with–at risk because I could tell he had plagiarized and his advisors were going to be able to tell also. He was grateful, and the work stopped until he redid that section.
Interestingly, I have found that taking a strong stand on ethics has been *very good* for my business, especially once I started writing books and giving speeches on the topic (e.g., my eighth book, Guerrilla Marketing Goes Green: Winning Strategies to Improve Your Profits and Your Planet (co-authored with Jay Conrad Levinson), http://www.guerrillamarketinggoesgreen.com )
I have turned down work because of what I feel are ethical reasons. I also have signed the “Business Ethics Pledge” located at http://site.business-ethics-pledge.org/read-the... after reading and reviewing “Guerrilla Marketing Goes Green.”
Reading: “Copywriters: Guilty as Charged? | Business Growth Strategies” ( http://bit.ly/9TTRo3 )
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You are paid to write copy, not a product review. You choose your clients, and that is where responsibility ends IMHO. If you don’t like the product, you don’t take the job.
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Shel, by saying you disagree with me and immediately qualifying that statement with “For me, being an ethical business owner means I want to work with ethical clients”, I hope you're not implying I don't care about ethics? Make no mistake: I too have had red flags go off and turned down or canceled lucrative jobs on the spot as a result; and I take the greatest care to work only with ethical clients.
I just don't see a need to publicly parade my ethics *before* someone violates them – it's something that should be taken for granted as a business norm.
My point is that legal responsibilities define ethical behavior as a standard practice. To flout that is usually to defy the law and descend into the shady side automatically.
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