New Contest Gives You a Chance to Win a Free Spot in Our Freelance Copywriting Coaching Program

by Ryan M. Healy

in Copywriting, Getting Clients

I’ve got a big announcement today.

That’s because John “Angel” Anghelache and I have created a new contest that gives you the chance to win a free spot in our upcoming “Secrets of Freelance Copywriting Success” Coaching Program, which starts the beginning of August.

If you are serious about becoming a successful, “booked solid” copywriter, then I guarantee you will want to enter this contest.

How can I say that with such confidence?

It’s because entering the contest is quick and easy. Not to mention 100% FREE.

To enter, here’s what you need to do. Simply post a comment below and answer these two questions:

1. WHY do you want to become a successful freelance copywriter (besides the money)? I’m looking for the ultimate reason you got interested in copywriting in the first place. What does all that money get you?

2. HOW will participating in our 6-month Coaching Program help you?

If you can answer these two questions, you have a shot at winning the prize.

What exactly will you win? Simply this…

  • FREE entry into the 6-month Freelance Copywriting Coaching Program starting in August 2008 (valued at $???)

Think about this for a minute. If you invest just a few minutes of your time to answer the two questions above, you could potentially walk away with free spot in our program.

If you apply what we teach you, it is entirely possible for you to land five, 10, or even 15 (or more) clients before the program is complete.

If each client paid you $2,500 (extremely conservative), you’d be winning the equivalent of $12,500 to $37,500… and that’s just for the first 6 months!

You’ll be able to continue profiting from the skills we teach you for the rest of your life.

I’d say that’s a fair trade, wouldn’t you?

Here’s what I want you to do now…

Scroll down to the section below that says “Leave a Comment.” Be sure to add your full name and email address so I can contact you in case you win. Answer the two questions. It should take you no more than 5 or 10 minutes. But the pay-off could be huge…

DEADLINE: Saturday, July 19th, at 12 noon Mountain time.

Any entries received after the deadline will NOT be considered.

John and I will choose a winner based on what we feel is the best response to these questions. How we pick the winner is at our sole discretion and whim.

The winner will be chosen and notified Saturday night, July 19th, by 9 p.m. Mountain time.

I’m really excited to kick off our Coaching Program with this contest, and look forward to hearing from everybody.

Be sure to check back Saturday night to see who the winner is.

Alright, then…  on your marks… get set… GO!

-Ryan M. Healy

P.S. If you don’t yet know what we’re including in the Coaching Program, you can listen to our two-part audio series here:

==> Details About the “Secrets of Freelance Copywriting Success” Coaching Program




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1 Steve O'Brien July 15, 2008 at 9:46 am

Answers:

1) I am very much interested in your course for two reasons: First, because I have been reading other people’s copy on my radio shows for years and would like to put fingers to keyboard to see if my scribbles might be an improvement. Second, because I crave an additional creative outlet, that potential is actually a bit more important than the dollars… not that I don’t expect to create a second income, however!

2) I would expect to digest as much of your expertise as possible and become a professional in the copywriting arena as well. I have enough time to dedicate to building this skill, and that is my goal.

Frankly, it also offers me the opportunity to have another topic to chat about on the radio and/or my blog.

Thanks

2 Jeremy Reeves July 15, 2008 at 9:50 am

Hey Ryan & John,

Ever since I was 19 and read “Rich Dad, Poor Dad” – I’ve wanted to create financial independence for myself. I’ve been working online for the past 3 years (I’m 22 now), putting in 10-15 hour days instead of going out with my friends.

After awhile I read about copywriting, and since I’ve always loved writing I figured I’d get the AWAI and give it a shot.

Now that I’m doing it – I love it!

There are a few reasons I want to make copywriting the thing I want to do for the rest of my life.

#1 – It’s something I love to do. Ever since I read Kiyosaki’s book I knew that I’d never do something I didn’t absolutely love doing (hence the reason why I’m putting in crazy hours to get it started and get out of the rat race)

#2 – I know you said not the money..but this is kind of different. One of my dreams since I read that book was to be able to make so much money that I could hardly have to work (turn copywriting into a passive thing by creating products & selling them) and spend my time helping out people who didn’t have a chance. But instead of just giving money to charity – I actually want to be the guy who BUILDS things for them personally, and holds workshops to help them get through hard times, and things like that.

#3 – I’ve always wanted to be a stay at home Dad. Having just gotten engaged this past Saturday (yay!) – that day is coming up faster than I thought. Being a copywriter would allow me to do that.

#4 – My mom has Multiple Sclerosis and my dad is, well, up in his years to say the least. In the next few years they’re both going to need help, and being a copywriter will again allow me to have the time to be able to help them.

#5 – My fiancee has epilepsy and it flares up badly if she gets stressed. Works stresses her out, so I don’t want her to have a job. Therefore – copywriting would give me the money to do that (plus I could help her out around the house and keep her completely stress free).

I know that all sounds kind of “Miss America” like…but I’m being 100% honest. I’ve always wanted to help other people – in high school I was the “go to guy” for any kind of advice :) I even went to college for psychology to help people – although the jobs that are available to me aren’t exactly what I thought they’d be.

As for the second question…

As I mentioned earlier, I put in A LOT of hours to try to get my copywriting business off the ground – but something just isn’t clicking. I definitely have the motivation to work hard – I just need some guidance to get my first few clients and get rid of my restaurant job so I can do copywriting full-time and start doing everything I mentioned earlier.

I also know the value of having a mentor (it’s often the difference between an average Joe and a superstar), I just never had enough money to actually pay for one.

So, how will the coaching program help me succeed?

It’s simple really…you tell me what to do, I do it, I succeed – and have you 2 to thank for it :)

Good luck with the program!

Jeremy
http://www.controlbeatingcopy.com

3 dianacacy July 15, 2008 at 10:35 am

Hello Ryan and John,

Where to begin?

I love crafting sales letters. I’m fascinated by magalogs and bookalogs. I find myself stalled at the stores, checking out the labels, how they fit together and what words. On car trips, I watch the bulletin boards for logos and slogans that work, and that don’t work, and imagine rewriting them so that do attract the customer. I can’t think of a better field to become a professional in.

I was raised in a home business, so I’ve always longed to work for myself. I love writing, so I’ve longed for a job that allows me to continue the personal writing while still leaving time for family.

In our current situation, my husband is stuck in a no-end job in an environment that’s endangering his health to a serious degree. Some of the locals call the place a ‘concentration camp’ because the atmosphere’s so destructive and the management so … at a loss for a word for it. By finding a profession that has potential to bring in enough income, and make that income mobile, it opens opportunities in our life together. He can finally get out of the corporate world and go back to school for what he truly loves – anthropology. And it gives me something to excel at that I love and enjoy working for in a situation where I’m not happy working in a ‘regular’ job, and where I have a foot condition that makes it more challenging to do so.

Through AWAI’s courses, I’ve found out that I really do have a love for copywriting, and have found my true calling. I just need a mentor’s help to get that extra push, and I know I’ll end up a A-level copywriter. I made the commitment to that end in December when I quit my day job and started the copywriting business officially in January.

I believe your coaching program is designed perfectly for giving me that final push that will propel me towards becoming a top copywriter. It’ll help me perfect my weak areas, make my strengths stronger, and learn so much more. Not to mention how it will also provide knowledge and connections to strengthen how I market my own writing projects.

I know my worth as a copywriter. I’m more than willing to invest in my future. Unfortunately, I’ve no more reserves to draw from, and no means to get more from. Not even like someone else I know who faced his fear and asked his in-laws for a loan to get the final push he needed. considering, we’ve had to give our parents money to keep the lights on again … that option’s not open for me.

Will I not make it if you don’t choose to give me the coaching program? Oh, I’ll still make it. I’ll still absorb everything I can get my hands on for free until I get the reserves to invest in myself again. You’ll still see me out there, making my own way.

Thanks for giving me the opportunity to tell you my story.
Diana Cacy Hawkins

4 Kristen Michaelis July 15, 2008 at 10:58 am

Hello Ryan & John,

When we had children, my husband and I both decided that our ultimate goal would be to work from home. It’s never been about money for us, but lifestyle. I don’t mean jet-setting, either. Being parents is the greatest, most rewarding challenge of our lives, and we take this calling seriously.

Our goal isn’t just to be at home in order to avoid commutes, it’s to have real time with our children and each other. Others may think we’re a bit crazy, but in our dream life we would be homeschooling all our children, living off grid, growing most of our own food, nursing our aging grandparents in our own home, going on extended mission trips to third world countries with our kids in tow, etc.

Within a year of the birth of our first son, my husband and I made the transition to working from home. We started this copywriting business and have watched it grow. Yet in the 3 1/2 years we’ve been doing this, we’ve never had it “take off” the way we want it to. We have a healthy list of repeat clients, and we’ve also never had a dissatisfied client. About half of our new business comes from enthusiastic referrals, so we know we’re pretty good at what we do. We even occasionally land some fairly high-paying jobs in the $3-5K range. Nevertheless, we only earn about half our income copywriting, and my husband does volunteer drug studies (yes, he’s a paid lab rat!) to earn the other half.

My hope is that by participating in your coaching program, we’ll get the tools we need to not only transition my husband away from those drug studies and pay down our enormous student loan debt, but also learn how to eventually make this into a passive income so that we can really have the time we need to live the life we want.

Wishing you all the best,
Kristen

5 Monika July 15, 2008 at 11:27 am

Hi all,
I love beeing a copywriter (I’m specialized to the web), cause I can give a unique voice to successful enterprises, so they can be recognized by her “herd” around the web.

I love!! ideas, possibilities, visions – and am really, really bad at structures. So I would strongly hope to get systems for my work so I don’t have to re-invent the wheel a few times each day.

Have a good time and a successful program!

Greetings, Monika

PS: My Copywriting is not such bad in German, so it definitively wouln’t be in vain ;-)

6 Brian July 15, 2008 at 11:31 am

Hi,

Following are my responses:

1) Why?… I have always enjoyed working with words. Also, I enjoy the freedom to structure my own time that a copywriting career brings.

2) How?… It will improve rough spots in my copywriting skills. Also, it will help me build a portfolio of clients.

Thank You.

7 Chris Amisano July 15, 2008 at 12:36 pm

Who doesn’t love the writer’s lifestyle? I have a three-second commute and I get to watch “I Love Lucy” over lunch. But it’s more than that…

I’m a storyteller. Really. I’ve published a novel and have finished a second one, although finding a new publisher and agent is somewhat like running the fraternity gauntlet with your pants down.

But copywriting…well, it’s a form of storytelling, too. It’s telling a story about how someone’s life will be better with a particular product or service. It’s about grabbing a prospect’s attention with a good hook and keeping them interested until the end – when they can see themselves new and improved. A good sales letter can take someone away from their stressed out routine and point them in another direction, just like a good novel or short story. And that’s what I love about copywriting.

You know, most of today’s hottest business leaders have said that in order to be financially successful, you’ve got to do what you love.

But I need some organization, not to mention practice. I need a good shove in the right direction – and I need to feel confident in attracting copywriting clients. The other facets of my business, the small writing projects that pay the bills but aren’t much of a challenge, have kept me away from copywriting. So your coaching program will help me focus and practice. And start telling stories that provide real benefits to clients and their prospects.

Thanks for the opportunity to share.

Sincerely,

Chris Amisano

8 Heather Harvey July 15, 2008 at 12:41 pm

Why do I want to be a freelance copywriter? Copywriter because I love to toy with words and make them do my bidding. Freelance because I think I’ve got a touch a ADD that makes me feel antsy and anxious going to the same employer day after day. Plus, I’ve got this really cool home office . . . it would be a shame to let that go to waste.

What will the money do for me? It will make going to high school reunions more fun. The cats are hoping for daily fresh tuna. Mastercard keeps demanding that I send its piece of the pie. Mostly, though, the money will bring me comfort.

How will the Coaching Program benefit me? Teachers/coaches/mentors breathing down my back with assignments and deadlines are way more scary than making cold calls. Tell me what I need to do–tell it to me with your “boss-man” voice. Bend me, shape me . . . I’ll be putty in your hands.

Thanks for the opportunity. Hope this could bring a smile.
Heather Harvey

9 Barbara "Rusty" LaGrange July 15, 2008 at 12:44 pm

1. WHY? Because I’m 55, and just starting out to pull away from the small radio corporate market. I can see that others are struggling in my region with web content, marketing ideas, and costs of doing business. I don’t need to be rich. I just want to do something that I love.: Writing and helping small companies do battle against the big corps to find their niche on the Web.
2. HOW? I’ve been studying the processes of becoming a catalog writer, I’ve ghost written a biography, I have years of experience writing for local newspapers, and now it’s time to focus on my own business. Getting clients is my biggest stumbling block. I need help making the next leap. Thanx for giving all of us a chance to have free help. We all need it.

10 Wayne Winkle July 15, 2008 at 1:02 pm

#1: My motivation for becoming a freelance copywriter is to start a second career in my fast-approaching retirement age in which I can use my God-given talent for writing in a productive way. Also, I can’t NOT write!

#2: That leads me to this response to how your program will help me: Since I’m going to write, I want to do the best I can. That means I should take adavantage of the best tutoring I can get. That means you!

11 Nick Leo July 15, 2008 at 2:05 pm

Answer to # 1…..No long drawn-out sob story.

1 – a. Presige of being called a “Copywriter”.
b. Respect from family, friends and business
professionals.
c. Great pay….able to give my family secure,
abundant, hassle free future.
d. Clean, creative work….no restrictions about
location or weather.
e. I like being the “BOSS”.

2 – I took “Advertising, Art & Design in college.
I took the AWAI copywriting course.
I took the Jay White catalog copywriting course.
(I preference is to be a “Catalog Copywriter”.
You, as my mentor, will hopefully help me get my
first client.

12 Tony Funderburk July 15, 2008 at 2:19 pm

Hey Ryan,

Congratulations on the hard work you and John have been doing. I hope it’s a great success for you. It should be because it sounds like you’ve both put a lot of thought and effort (and experience) into it.

Now…to your questions:

Why?: I’ve been a “popular” writer for many years, and I’ve only recently come to the copywriting and its benefits. My “popular” writing got me lots of “pats on the back” but my income was always a struggle…sometimes fantastic…sometimes zilch.

Copywriting is fascinating. It’s both a creative process and a facts-and-figures process. It’s right brain/left brain, and I love the challenge of taking reasoning and turning it into emotions…which, in turn, justify the reasoning.

Words represent ideas, and ultimately anything that can be bought, sold, traded, or even given away began as an idea…a thought pattern in someone’s head. Imagine…little electrons and neurons transmitting signals based on the five senses. And information building from things even the five senses can’t detect…love, pain, fear, kindness, longing, satisfaction, and countless others.

And to add to the answer…I’m not all that young anymore, and I want a career I can take into my “senior” years. A career I can build on with products and information I can pass on to other aspiring writers.

Now; for the “How?”:
Your upcoming course is the somewhat “missing link” for me. I’ve been getting clients (good paying ones) but only on a hit-or-miss basis. I want the “hits” to crush the “misses”.

It sounds to me like you guys have come up with a course and methods to teach the dreaded “self-marketing” part of the equation. And I want (translate “need”) to fill in that blank.

I’m an excellent writer, and I know if and when I fill in that blank, you’ll have a serious success story on your hands. I’m sure you’ll have others as well, but I am, after all, attempting to win the “comp”. ;-)

Thanks again for the opps,
And I’ll make sure you get the props…
Tony

13 Katherine Jasmine July 15, 2008 at 2:28 pm

Ryan and Angel: I’ve known for a lot of years that I can write better than most people … and I’ve used that gift to help craft brochures, flyers, catalogs, and other marketing communications materials for clients. The fact is that I have never been taught formally and I want very much to learn to take my writing to the next step. Why? Because I want the freedom that being a freelancer can offer. I am acutely aware that being on ones own, beating the bushes for work and meeting deadlines may not be someone else’s definition of freedom, but I have this lofty idea that I will be earning enough to pick and choose my projects. The bonus will be that I will no longer have to work an 80-hour week!

The answer to question number two is simple. I’m sure you’ve heard the story of the “shoemaker’s children.” I get paid to help clients market their products and services. And … I’m very good at it. I research and present them with a strategic marketing plan that I then help them to implement. Marketing myself, however, isn’t that easy. I procrastinate; I find other “important” tasks to do. I would welcome the discipline that a coaching class provides … not to mention the fun that I’m sure is a part of your curriculum!

14 Ed Anderson July 15, 2008 at 2:34 pm

I had the opportunity to be unemployed for the last year and a half. (I am working now) I looked for work, tried to find profitable self employment, and chewed through a whole lot of retirement savings. During that time I met a lot of self employed people. I saw what they did and didn’t do. I loved the flexibility and freedom they had in their life. I tried to make the jump but was not able to before the savings became short. I had to go back into the traditional job market. The lifestyle is what I want from a copy writing business. I know it’s not all hanging out in coffee shops and vacations. However it’s a lot better than 9 to 5, five days a week with two weeks of vacation. (and course more money wouldn’t be bad either)

I’m currently writing for a few people. Unfortunately I’m doing most of it for free or little money. That’s why I want the six month coaching. I think that if I had someone already successful to model and mentor me that I could make it work this time. I’ve only got ten more years before retirement. My savings are a little lite now and I think that a successful copy writing career would be my ticket. I think that this six month coaching could get me there a lot faster than I could by myself.

Ed Anderson
edanderson@bizworxtn.com
http://www.masteringyourquest.com
http://www.edcanderson.com

15 Colin Y.J. Chung July 15, 2008 at 3:17 pm

1. Four reasons, 2 negative, 2 positive:

i. Control – The freelancer life would give me the ultimate responsibility to run my life as I would like to. I control my salary, my raise, my schedule.

Like Ryan, I find myself sleeping at work… because of the demands of a full-time-job, a one-year-old son, and while working on getting my copywriting business up and running.

ii. Compensation – the more I work, the more value I bring to the table, the more I expect to be paid. Not so in a job.

Last year, I was on this fast track in my job, running huge projects spanning centers across the globe affecting 230+ head count… I thought I was hot stuff. Until I saw my salary increase for the year. I brought tremendous value to the table, I want to be paid for it.

iii. Fit – I prefer the introverted, creative work life. I can whip up the charm and persuasion at work… and it’s fun for a while, but I get drained by it. But give me a project or assignment where I can go at it alone, and meet with delegates once a week only… that’s my game.

I also have an artistic streak about me. Been in rock bands, wrote fiction, painted, etc. I’ve realized recently that the structure and underlying emotional currents of a powerful story is frighteningly similar to an effective sales letter.

iv. Freedom – my ultimate goal in life is to have multiple passive income streams flowing in so that I can *choose* to work, not *have* to.

Copywriting seems to be the gateway for creating capital to invest in further businesses/investments.

2. Going back to my fast-tracking in the corporate world above… I KNOW and UNDERSTAND the value of a relationship with a mentor. They’ve been where you have and can give instant, honest feedback. This blows the water out of any theory or lecturing because you can talk about real-life experience while its still fresh in your mind, and have the mentor dissect it LIVE in front of you to point out all the little subtleties.

I would not be where I am today in my job if it wasn’t for a few key individuals that took the time to mentor me.

The worse thing about starting any new venture is “you don’t know what you don’t know”. Nevermind getting the right answers, you don’t even know what the RIGHT questions are.

Colin Y.J. Chung

16 John Phillips July 15, 2008 at 3:18 pm

Why do I want to be a copywriter?
It’s a field that is unaffected by economic downturns, the world always needs copywriters – whether the world knows it or not!
I really would love to work at home – be able to see the day – to – day things my kids do that I’m missing out of at the moment.

Why your six month course?
I’ve seen both of you go from unknowns to highly sought after copywriters. I want to discover how you did that.
Ryan, you and I started about the same time. I’m still at my crummy day job. What made the difference in your copywriting career climb?

17 John Patten July 15, 2008 at 3:19 pm

John and Ryan,

I want to become a successful copywriter because of a curious incident in a bookstore one day.

Here’s how it happened: Several years ago, I was browsing fitness magazines when I saw a headline that grabbed me by the shirt collar and glued my eyes to the page. I felt myself forced to read every last word of a 4-page sales letter (in tiny print)… and I couldn’t sleep until I ordered the product.

I bought the magazine (just for the ad) and brought it home. I kept reading it… over and over. Finally, I stumbled to the phone to place my order because I couldn’t stand the desire anymore.

When I received the product, it turned out to be good… but oddly, I kept on reading the sales letter.

Why? I was curious. I couldn’t believe how well I was sold. I HAD to figure out why I couldn’t sleep until I had this product.

That’s how the journey began. Since that moment, I have studied everything I can get my hands on about what exactly a grouping of words can do to get people drooling to buy a product or service.

Fast forward to March of this year: I wrote my first sales letter for a client. He made $10,000 in the first month selling a $149 product. I cannot even begin to express the jubilation I felt that words… MY words… held such power.

Having been a content writer for several years, I now know where my writing passion truly is… in salesmanship. I can’t get enough. I read copywriting courses like other people read USA Today. I collect sales letters like some people collect coins… when I see one that fires me up even a little bit, it’s in my swipe file.

I HAVE to be a freelance copywriter. It’s not a choice anymore. It’s a bug… a happy disease… an obsession.

So how will your 6-month coaching course help me? Based on a mutual acquaintance’s recommendation, I believe you two have a uniquely modern approach to finding clients. You will cut my learning curve into a tenth of what I could figure out on my own. I know it.

The very fact that both of you have BEEN THERE and are currently making money… turning down clients… and not worrying about where the next paycheck is coming from… tells me that you can guide me on the correct steps to take by telling me, “No, don’t do it that way… tweak it like this… and then send it.”

I believe you have the power to show me how to take this passion for sales writing and direct it into tasks that actually find the clients and pull in the business… while skyrocketing the success of my own clients in the process.

Talk about win-win-win!

I also hope to create a relationship with you and your colleagues so that we can all help each other out in the future with leads, clients, and general strategies.

Whatever happens, I’ll go forward. But I’d love the amazing opportunity to be a part of this program.

Thank you both so much for the opportunity you have created.

I hope to be the person who makes you say, “Damn, this guy has done so well it was worth it to have had him in the program.”

Thanks again!

John Patten

P.S. One way or another, I’m taking action. I’ve already taken your direct mail contact strategy to task and should have my first mailing put together by next week.

18 Michael July 15, 2008 at 4:00 pm

The Right Words can make you Millions!

Dear Ryan and John,

Here you are, two accomplished copywriters trying to make the difficult choice of who will get a shot at free coaching that could be worth thousands of dollars. You want the candidate to have the drive necessary to do the hard work of getting paying clients. You want someone who knows that even though you can guide them and give them advice about the fastest, easiest and most effective ways of making BIG money in copy writing, it stills takes more than just a drive FOR Big Money. There has to be something more driving the candidate to achieve.

Let me tell you just a little about myself and what my goals and dreams are and then by the end of this letter you will feel that I deserve the free coaching.

First of all my name is Michael Ellis and I am 37 years old. I live with my fiance and our 2 year old son Roman. We are currently living with her aging parents as we are very tight on cash right now. I have a part time job doing merchandising and she is going to college for her accounting degree. As I said money is tight, but that is not the reason why I want to be a copywriter.

Words are powerful. I have always had a love affair with them. I bet you are the kind of guys that know exactly what I mean. Words are a kind of magic. I also love to help people by giving then options and advice. I am one of those people, you know the type… I just can’t not sell to people. I recommend movies to my friends all the time. I am always letting people know about cool new websites or a great new book I read. I feel like it is my way of spreading valuable knowledge. I think that copywriting is one of the greatest ways of effectively giving people information in a way that they can most use. And although the money that I know I will be making would be life changing for myself and my family, I would still do copywriting even if I didn’t get paid. Its not just what I do, its who I am.

Lets face it. Everyone can benefit from having a coach in some area of life. Its a fact that most of the most successful people in the world credit having a coach or mentor as the #1 Reason that they were able to achieve such high levels of success. Nothing can compare to having access to someone who has gone through the hard work of becoming successful. You’ve made the mistakes and rose above them. You have learned the hard way what is and isn’t the best ways to be a successful copywriter. By gaining access to your coaching program, I will be saving myself years of trial and error. In addition, having a coach who can keep you on track and accountable is invaluable and would really allow a me to make continual progress.
Quite simply, a coaching program like yours is like Turbo Charging my progress toward my life goals and achievement.

Thank you so much for this opportunity,

Michael Ellis

19 Margo Twisselman July 15, 2008 at 4:50 pm

I was excited about the opportunity you offer until I surfed over and read all these entries. My heavens, they are terrific! I simply don’t know how you will choose just one person.

Thanks for letting me dream a little.

Margo

20 Lois Bernstein July 15, 2008 at 4:52 pm

I want to become a successful freelance copywriter because I want to march to my own drumbeat, be master of my working domain, use my creativity and think outside the box.

I spent many years as a classroom teacher and then went on to being a college, field supervisor for student teachers. Education is in serious trouble, and for me, it become monotonous.

And then I found copywriting, and it was a breath of fresh air. I always wanted to do some kind of writing and copywrtiing was it. I am now “free” to do what I want, on my time, and, hopefully, produce outstanding materials.

As for the money – it will help with retirement and allow to to fulfill the dream of traveling to those places I’ve always wanted to see, and possibly having a home-away-from- home.

The Coaching Program will give me a chance to learn from the best. It will help me refine my skills through critique which I welcome. There is always room to improve, and will put me on the path to to a rewarding career.

21 Michael Lindsey July 15, 2008 at 5:14 pm

This is an awesome idea for a contest, and I’ve had a blast reading the other replies so far. So, here goes with my answers:

1)”So, what do you do?”

That’s what we say when we meet someone new. It’s the grownup version of “what do you want to be when you grow up?” Since I left high school, I haven’t had a good answer. I’ve had jobs, gigs, schemes, plans, and sometimes something approaching a career. But whenever someone asked me what I did, what I did wasn’t what came to mind. If someone had asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up, none of my jobs would have been the answer. At worst, they were an attrition, a gulag, a sentence with a paycheck at the end. At best, a compromise.

Looking at things from a new perspective lately, I’ve been reintroduced to myself. After so many life changes in such a short period of time, I’ve been given the opportunity to re-evaluate myself and my life, without the baggage of preconceptions or foregone conclusions. “What I did” was work for my future. I ran as hard as I could trying to get ahead, and usually ended up slowly losing ground instead. I figured that if I could just stick it out in this job or that for the next five or ten years, I’d be pretty well off.

I don’t want to do that anymore.

What do I want to be when I grow up? I want to be a vibrant and creative being, in a community with people of a like mind. I want to entertain, to tell stories in concert with others to a rapt audience and in the span of a performance try to touch their life and their emotions. I want to sing often enough that I get my range back, and spend a good chunk of my time doing things I love so much they give me goosebumps. I want to get up early most days, and sleep in now and again when it’s needed. I want to take my dog for long walks, then lie down on a hill and read for a while and let him trot around on his own. I want to see all of my friends, and not just the ones whose schedules are compatible with my own. I want to learn… not because I’ll qualify for a better position with a certain degree, but because of the rush finding a new passion provides.

I want to explore. I want to go places that only the adventurous go, places that contrast so strongly with the mundane and everyday set dressings of life you can’t help but live in that moment. I want to wake up every so often in a bed that isn’t my own, even if it is a little less comfortable. I want to throw open the windows to a skyline that’s unfamiliar, filled with the sounds of a people and culture that are a little less well-worn than my own. I want to break bread with strangers, make new friends and hear new stories, and hopefully not share too many of my own. I want to help… locally, abroad, I want to give a piece of myself to the causes I support, and know exactly what it is that my contribution accomplished.

The structure of my life, as it stands, is in almost direct opposition to how I want to live, but it’s not beyond repair. I’ve lived like someone who wants to get rich and then think about what they want to do with the money. Copywriting seems to be that perfect fusion of something that’s profitable combined with something that lets out my creative forces. In my work history, I’ve found one thing that I’m very, very good at: sales. And in my friendships, I’ve found another thing that I’m not too shabby at, either: storytelling. (I’m that friend who’s always asked to “tell them about the time…”) My forays into copywriting so far have been a blast, but without the extensive resume, they haven’t been as profitable as I’d like. I want into the program to get the gameplan for my business.

I’ve just learned that it’s not all about the money. I turned 24 this year, and it’s probably the first year my income will break the six-figure mark… and I’m less happy than when I was working overnights at a diner, staying up till dawn and drinking coffee with my friends. I want to write copy to re-learn how to work to live, instead of living to work.

2) On the wall of my room, above my desk, is a dry erase board covered in scribbles, thoughts, and pictures of things that trigger thoughts of my goals. In the middle is a quote, oft modified but first written by Caesar – “Experience is the teacher of all things.”

Both Mr. Healy and Mr. Anghelache have experience in being successful copywriters that I currently lack. The clear path is to listen to what they have to say, determine the direction of success, and begin to move in that direction at the best possible speed. With the passion of my goals, the knowledge of two experts at hand, and the talent I work daily to further cultivate and expand, the question is not HOW will I succeed, but WHEN. I plan on putting all of my efforts behind every step of your process, and trusting in your success as a building block for my own.

- Michael Lindsey

22 Ellis Kirk July 15, 2008 at 7:54 pm

1. Being persuasive (the skill every successful copywriter has mastered) is the key to world dominion.

2. You will hone my already considerable experiences and talents into an unstoppable force with which to be reckoned, propelling me to the apex of possibility.

23 Shaya Kass July 15, 2008 at 9:25 pm

1. While reading Jack Canfield’s “The Success Principles”, one of the first exercises that he does is to have you figure out your life’s purpose. My purpose in life is to inspire others to live in happiness and in gratitude.

Now while this may sound very “mumbo-jumbo”, what it means, bottom-line, is helping people to be happy.

I have used my writing and my blog to begin that process, and I want to take it to the next level. I want to help people find products that help them to be happy. One way to reach people is through copywriting.

I would imagine that, to a certain extent, you share this vision. Otherwise, you wouldn’t be helping people to improve in their copywriting and giving away a free seat. ( I know it is also good marketing – isn’t it great when you can give something away AND benefit!)

2. While I have beginner’s skills, I need to hone those skills. In addition, I need a coach and a mastermind group to help me “get off my butt” and do the things I know I should be doing.

Most of us know what we should do but have something blocking us from executing. The program will help me get over (or under or around or blow up) those blocks.

24 Pavel Davydov July 15, 2008 at 11:08 pm

1. Why I want to become a successful freelance copywriter:

That’s because I realize the power of the WORD, and how it structures our lives and whatever we do. And because of this, direct-response copywriting for me is not just about money, influence, persuasion, recognition etc. First of all, it’s about mastering my MIND and my LIFE, and being able to affect minds and lives of others. That’s WAY more that just $.

2. How participating in Coaching Program will help me:

Right now I’m getting recognition as one of the best direct-response copywriters within Russian Internet. But its direct-response culture is right in its infancy, and I realize that there’s WAY to go to match your real-world level. And another thing that I know is that COACHING under a proper supervison is the only way to get maximum results in minimum amount of time.

25 James Palmer July 16, 2008 at 5:22 am

I have always wanted to be a writer, but it didn’t take me long to realize that I’ll never be the next Stephen King and that journalism will never pay all the bills. In spite of having a college degree, I’m working in a dead end, low paying job I hate, and I want desperately to break free. I have a daughter on the way, and I want to be here in the evenings with her and to sit down and eat dinner with my family, a simple pleasure my day job makes impossible. Plus, I want to show my daughter that anything is possible and that anyone can make their dreams come true. I want her to live in a world without limitations.

What I want to get out of the course is how to choose better clients. I’m getting there, but I’ve made some bad choices that I’m still paying for (does the 125 page book for $400 ring a bell?). When prospects get in touch with me I find out they are already a bad fit, and I am attracting the wrong kinds of people. I have some promising prospects, but those aren’t a done deal yet. I need to know how to get good direct marketing clients who need sales letters.

26 Chris Jolma July 16, 2008 at 8:23 am

WHY?

Why? Because there’s nearly unlimited opportunity out there, and copywriting fits my talents and temperaments perfectly.

However, opportunity is fueled by time, something I have in short supply these days. Since our son was born four months ago, my wife has had to stay home to take care of him. This presents certain difficulties since our mortgage requires two incomes. We’d sell our home if we could, but we’re upside down and in this market, we will likely be in that position for another couple of years.

I started a business on the side that helps make ends meet, but it requires my constant attention. I spend 10 hours per day at my J.O.B., then spend another five or so hours per day working on the side business. I now measure time in minutes, not hours, weeks or months. So, in addition to freeing me up to be my own boss (everyone’s dream, and occasionally, every entrepreneur’s nightmare), becoming a professional copywriter will directly help this fledgling business that NUMEROUS people have told me is “ingenious,” “brilliant,” or “just what I needed.”

But of course it’s also about the money. I am currently employed as a proposal writer for a non-profit in D.C. I raise hundreds of thousands of dollars for the organization, but my take-home paycheck is the same every month – a couple thousand dollars that doesn’t pay the bills. Why would I want to continue spending ten hours per day making money for someone else when I can spend the same amount of time making a LOT MORE working on projects I CHOOSE to do?

Just one year ago I was simply a consumer. I had a day job, I paid my bills, and I hoped for that little raise every year. But when the housing market tanked, it was like opportunity kicked in my front door, grabbed me by the collar of my stained t-shirt, and screamed in my face, “Get up, you lazy blob! I’m here to whip you in shape. Now drop and give me twenty business ideas!”

Only one year later, I’m a business owner who knows the value of time. A W-2 job is no longer for me. It shouldn’t be for anyone, because this country offers too much opportunity for anyone who wants to break out of the paycheck-to-paycheck cycle.

Being a professional copywriter will allow me to set my own schedule and see a direct connection between the time I spend and how much money I make. THAT is value, and that is why I want to be a professional copywriter.

HOW?

The 6-month Coaching Program will help me by providing much-needed mentorship. When I started my side business, I knew next to nothing about my industry. I’ve built this company up from nothing by making my own mistakes, teaching myself, and making much-needed improvements along the way. While this method is extremely enriching, it’s very time-consuming. What I hope to get from the coaching program is expert, professional guidance that saves me from making time-wasting mistakes. This program will streamline the learning process and hopefully even bring in some extra income while I learn.

Thanks much for the opportunity. I know there are many other worthy contenders for this “scholarship,” and I thank you for the time you took reading my entry.

Best,
Chris Jolma
cjolma@gmail.com

27 Clef Williams July 16, 2008 at 9:45 am

Hello Ryan and John,

A few years ago, my Island home Bermuda, was steam-rolled by Hurricane Fabian. It left a trail of death and destruction throughout. We were left reeling from the sheer devastation. We had no electricity, no decent drinking water and the island infrastructure was all tore up.

Five days after her deadly visit, after seeking high and low, I was finally able to secure two Picnic Coolers. They were like gold dust. The Picnic Coolers were used to hold meats and other food items that needed refrigeration.

That first weekend after Fabian struck, my wife (a nurse), and one of her Church friends walked throughout a community that was struck extra hard by Hurricane Fabian. Their intention was to pray with and for the members of that community.

The last house they visited was the home of a retired elderly couple. They were in a bad state. No electricity, no water, low on food, Husband was sick and needed medical attention, Wife was stressed out with worry and concern for their plight. My wife and her friend hunkered down and started to take care of the several needs of this elderly couple.

Around this time, I was at home doing ‘Hurricane’ repairs. Suddenly, my cell phone rang.

“Who is bothering me now?” I grumpily thought out loud.

I looked at the cell number coming in…

Oh…

…it’s the Missus.

I answered in the sweetest voice I could muster, “Hi Hon.”

She quickly told me what was happening.

Right off the top of my head, I asked, “Need my help?”

“Yes,” she immediately shot back!

Why was I feeling as if I walked directly into a trap?

She fired off these precise instructions, “Take our food out of the two Picnic Coolers. Clean the coolers. Reload both coolers with ice. Bring them to me immediately.”

My mouth dropped open.

I pleaded, half-heartedly, “You mean the two coolers that took me five days to find?”

Silence…

She does that every now and then. Don’t really know why. Maybe she picks up the half-heartedness in my voice. Or… lets take it to a really simple level. She didn’t consider my response to be a question.

Nevertheless, I continued, hoping against hope to jog some sense into my givish wife, “What do you want me to do with the food?”

In order to assert some authority into the situation, my voice rose a few decibels and I added, for good measure, “Trash it?”

She gingerly but calmly responded, “We have two people whose needs are greater than ours.”

I replied sarcastically, obviously without words, “We?”

Then I replied, humbly, but with words, “Give me fourty-five minutes to an hour.”

She sweetly responded, “See you then Honey… love ya.”

What would you have done? I know what I did!

I removed our items from the two Picnic Coolers, cleaned and filled them both with ice and promptly took them to my wife.

A smile comes to my face whenever I tell this true story. But guess what, in the end, we didn’t lose our refrigerated foods. I was able to secure another Picnic Cooler which served us until electricity was restored.

All I can say is that when my wife prays, things happen. That couple never forgot the kindness of my wife, her friend and myself (smile).

Anyway…

My Queen is now unwell. After years of doing for others, I now want to do for her. Copywriting will allow me to take care of her.

Thank you for your consideration,

Clef

28 Cory Winn July 16, 2008 at 9:55 am

This may seem kinda strange, but I’ve always been interested in magic spells.

You see, from my late teens I’ve always had a passion for NLP and therapeutic metaphor. I liked to help my friends with their issues and tell stories that help people…

But it wasn’t until recently I began learning that the skills I’ve developed to help me change people can be useful for copywriting as well.

For making the sale.

One way of doing this is called eliciting criteria. (I’m sure both you guys understand this on some level)

A criteria is your prospect’s main, overriding “hot button,” or feeling he’ll get from the benefits your product (and/or copy) povides.

And it’s probably the reason you asked me what the money will mean to me. It’s important.

So let me tell you my criteria for learning this stuff:

Long time ago there was a copywriter who did not know how to get clients.

He took a rather crass approach and walked into people’s businesses and started trying to fix things.

He soon learned this was not the best way to get a client, because he genuinely wanted to make something better…not piss people off.

So that idea went down the drain. Flush.

Next, he tried a less invasive approach. He wrote one or two page letter to a list of businesses he legally stole from the D&B Million Dollar Database.

This letter had much flare… but nothing to back it up. Afterall, our young writer had never had a real client before.

So down the shitter it went.

And as the nixies came in (and no calls), so did the frustration.

So like any smart 25-year old in a tough spot, our hero went out and finally did something intelligent:

He went out and got laid. Repeatedly.

And even though this didn’t solve his client problems, our young cub was feeling good about himself…

And as you know…that means something…

(to be continued)

29 Chad July 16, 2008 at 10:46 am

1. It’s not all about the money – although that definitely feeds the ego beat – instead it’s about the flexibility. My fiancee is going to be getting her nursing degree in May 2009, one month before our wedding – and I want to be able to work when she works and play when she plays.

You see, nurses can sometimes have wild schedules – three 12 hour shifts for the week and they’re done. What a great opportunity to hang out with my best friend, eh? No 9-5 can give me that opportunity, but freelance copywriting can!

(and I just flat-out love writing copy – from headline to PS…it’s a blast)

2. Your program will help because I’m willing to learn. It’s like anything in life, you can be taught a lesson and get nothing from it if you don’t apply it. There are millions of lessons around us every day – but in order to work it has to come from somebody that you know, like, and trust.

Well, I don’t know you – but I’ve been following your blog for a year and watching your videos along the way. I know you have valuable tools that can help me achieve my dreams…and I can’t wait to see them in action.

Right now my budget for “education” is dry since I purchased Clayton Makepeace’s Ultimate Desktop Copy Coach program. But if I was able to squeak through the cracks, I’m sure you and Makepeace would make a deadly combo for my career!

30 Diego July 16, 2008 at 11:09 am

c’mon men! I have never thought about this writer stuff! And i’m starting to think this can be VERY nice… even your course!!! Thanks for this post… i’ll try to know a little more about this…

31 Brad July 16, 2008 at 12:20 pm

I got interested in dm copy back in the early 60 and 70’s. When I was a manager of a jewelry store back in the late 60’s. The most successful ad we ever ran was selling and indian penny pendant surrounded by faux diamonds. The headline read: ” Buy A Penny For $10″.That one small ad got 40 people inthe door with cash in hand. Then i used to subscribe to a retail ad newsletter by Hubert Simon in NY, and I used to talk to him on the phone all the time. He wrote the second most famous ad in dm history:” How To Get Out Of The Rat Race And Into The Chips”. The first was Joe Carbo’s, ” The Lazy Man’s Way To Riches”. I moved on to another job in the 70’s for a music distributor. My job was to write ads and run them for the mail order division. There was no internet, and not many books available on the subject except for John Caples and Claude Hopkins. So I had to wing it. Then I moved onto another retail company where I wrote ads and subscribed to Halbert’s newsletter when he lived in LA. I used to talk to him on the phone for pointers too. It was a thrill to write an ad and watch the people come to the store in droves. I moved away for a few years, and got away from it all. Now, it’s a lot easier to learn how to write copy since there’s a ton of info on the internet and a lot of the hard to get ads and books have been reprinted. I would still like to learn from people who has already done it since you can only learn so much from reading books. Learning from a pro cuts your learning curve done to ziltch. Just look what happen to all the guys Halbert personally taught. They’re all copy superstars. Like I said, nothing is more exciting then writing a winner or beating a control. To sum things up, it’s like the headline for an ad that sold a money making mail order opportunity. In his ad, the copywriter feigned going to his PO Box to see if he got any mail orders: “When I peeped through the glass and saw the stacks of mail, I almost dropped the key”!

32 Mark Pyrc July 16, 2008 at 12:31 pm

Why become a successful freelance copywriter? Freedom! Freedom to express my creativity. Freedom to help others grow their businesses. Freedom to enjoy a lifestyle most only dream about.

There’s a multitude of reasons why me – or anyone – would desire the successful freelance copywriter career. It’s the “how” that holds many of us back or keeps us from reaching our true potential in this profession.

I think that you two characters have the keys to unlocking the mystery! Your Coaching Program provides me with proven, practical knowledge, been-there-done-that experience, and yes, even the foot-to-the-fire accountability factor. A Coaching Program with you gents elevates all that book learnin’ into real world experience. The know-how to build…and grow…an unending stream of clients. Good, paying clients! Why spend years stumbling in the dark?

So teach me guys. Make me dangerous! I’ll even pay the tuition – and then some – with my initial copywriting jobs. No reason you two can’t join in on all the fun!

33 Dave C July 16, 2008 at 12:42 pm

1. WHY do you want to become a successful freelance copywriter (besides the money)? I’m looking for the ultimate reason you got interested in copywriting in the first place. What does all that money get you?

I like writing because it has always come naturally.

And as I learn, I can see my writing improve.

Despite trying hard, I have to face reality — I don’t fit into corporate structures, and have been fired from jobs.

My Mom wanted me to be a writer.

As for “all that money”, I’ve yet to see it.

Sure, I have clients; it’s just that – at the risk of sounding greedy – I want more.

With more income…
I’d increase the size of my tithe.

I’d fix the corner of the foundation that’s currently resting on what one contractor called “a load-bearing window”.

Next summer I’d send a few kids to camp…. not so much for them, but because it makes me feel good to do nice things for people.

And when I’m finally above the water line, then maybe I’ll be able to pick up one or two of the hobbies I’ve always wanted to try.

2. HOW will participating in our 6-month Coaching Program help you?

I figure over the last several years I’ve spent about $20,000 on copywriting books and courses – including Shaune Clark’s. I’m reasonably sure I know HOW to write copy… I’m weak on the business aspect.

And not for lack of trying. I don’t get flyers out in the country, so I asked many people to save me theirs. Nobody has come through, so I haven’t been able to try Ryan’s technique.

I tried working with small businesses, but small business people don’t get it – they think advertising is an expense, not an investment.

I spent a day going to the nearest big city library to try John’s SRDS technique. Unfortunately the Canuck version doesn’t list the same info as the US one.

Still I keep plugging away, trying new things.

For example, I have some Jason Leister consultation time in the bank, and currently I’m trading time for lessons with John Manley to learn how he does Internet marketing.

So learning how to do the business part of copywriting-marketing is the most important.

But there’s more…

Having studied all the greats, I don’t want to mimic any of them. It’s too easy to slap up a headline and body copy, testimonials, and closes. As Gene Schwartz wrote, “Why haven’t television owners been told these facts?” could be transposed into “Why haven’t fishermen been told these facts?” but it isn’t the same.

Research and interviewing are important… but so is being able to tell WHAT the copy needs, and WHEN it needs it. That’s where experience and knowledge come in. Shaune calls it “discernment”.

As I’ve been following both of you for a while now, I’m certain your course will help “round out” my knowledge.

Hope you can forgive my name-dropping.

And please resist the notion that I’m a perpetual student who lacks the spheres necessary to take action.

I truly want to make it in this business.

34 Emette Massey July 16, 2008 at 7:29 pm

Ryan . . . John . . . Greetings!

Your informative videos have been very helpful. You guys are top notch all the way! Thanks for sharing your expertise!

To answer question #1: MORE . . . MORE . . . MORE!! Guys I know this sounds like a greedy man talking here but I’m not a selfish person at all. But I do want more FREEDOM; FLEXIBILITY and EXCITEMENT that only comes from being a successful freelance copywriter.

There is no other career in the entire world gives so much. As direct response copywriters, our persuasive words start cash flowing in a new business and keep it flowing in an existing one.

Our words touch the hearts of generous donors that help fund new research to find new cures for disease, keep the needy fed and sheltered, and help build a better tomorrow for generations to come.

And I want to be a part of this!

I want the freedom to choose when and what projects I work on. I want the flexibility of taking time off when I see fit. I want to experience the excitement of seeing a client’s face light up for the first time her business grows beyond her wildest dreams!

As far as question #2 is concerned –well quite frankly I see you guys as the treasure map to the Wizard in Land of OZ . . . the bridge that will get me from where I’m at now to where I want to go. And I know by participating in this program you can take me there because you both are living the dream right now!

Prospecting is one of my weakest areas. And that’s what I want to get out of your program. Learning from a couple of “real-live” direct response players who are in the trenches day in and day out would be exciting and challenging-not to mention profitable.

Ryan and John thanks for giving us this contest opportunity. That’s pretty cool. And thanks again for sharing you knowledge as you have been doing.

I bid you both greater successes in all your endeavors,

Emette E. Massey

35 Owen July 17, 2008 at 2:51 am

healymarketing.com has a spelling mistake?

‘exhilirating’ jumped out at me like a bipolar orca on the up cycle.

‘exhilarating’?

-o-

36 Markp July 17, 2008 at 5:08 am

I’d make my clients more money. Much more money. And with the rewards…I’d enjoy life to the full. I’d work shorter days. I’d start work early and finish early. Whisk my wife off to surprise lunches in great restaurants. Do more cycling flat out in quiet country lanes. Go mountain biking on wind swept cliff top paths…Take my children playing golf or tennis when they come home from school. Have more beach BBQ’s with family and friends after surfing. Watch more golden sunsets kiss the Atlantic Ocean. Take more time out to relax and reflect how good life is. I’d take more holidays and long weekend breaks. Do more exploring. See more of the world. Discover far flung places. Taste exotic dishes. I’d be a better parent by being around more for my children. I’d entertain more often. Attend culinary classes to add new skills and recipes to my repertoire. Of course this all happens when my business is super successful.

You’d be helping me to be a top class copywriter. Only quicker and easier. After all, I’m on the way by being mentored by the world’s best copy coach. You’re providing the missing piece of the jigsaw – solving the hardest bit of copywriting; the feast and famine of getting clients.

37 Ryan M. Healy July 17, 2008 at 7:27 am

@Owen – I misspelled a word just so you’d find it. ;-)

38 Lisa J. Lehr July 17, 2008 at 8:28 am

1. Why: money to me means freedom—freedom to spend my time on higher pursuits than slaving away at a j-o-b, taking orders from people “above” me and giving orders to people “below” me. Sure, there are j-o-b-s that need to be done, but they can be done by people who thrive in that environment. I have the gift of writing and I intend to use it.

My “higher pursuits” have recently taken on a greater urgency, because I’m in the process of creating two new ventures, http://www.bon-bagay.com and http://www.fitnesssolutionsforyou.com. These are family projects with lofty goals: 1) they will give my three kids financial freedom, and 2) they will provide life-changing benefits to the groups they focus on.

Some startup capital would help, and that’s where income from client projects would be useful. Please visit these sites and see what I mean!

2. How: your 6-month Coaching Program will help me skip the learning curve and go right to making money. I plan to use my copywriting skills to make my own Internet businesses the best they can be, and work with clients only if they have “grand visions” of making the world a better place.

You guys obviously know what you’re talking about and can tell us what you did so we can do it too. I’m tired of wasting my time on things that don’t work. Thanks for reading.

Lisa

39 birdiebob July 17, 2008 at 10:21 am

well….all those seem to be good reasons..
but

I want to be A CULT LEADER..mesmerizing atttractive young girls to follow me to the end of the world, climb a tall mountain to the top and spend endless hours taking care of me ….

or not

I am interested in being able to write, effective, cash pulling copy for some clients so that we make extend the reach of our Stewpot Service out to more people in the community . We need to generate revenues to support our newly envisioned Dental Service for the poor and under employed. This is budgeted for annual expenditures of 200K , so I need to make my buddies in the business community enough from your mind bending copy writing to allow them the 10% deductions I want them to have…

At any rate, this is phun ….and quite entertaining….

(left that mis spelled for our examiner)

and also , would like to introduce to the world, our new amazing simple method to increase your IQ 50% through our SECRET , Patented, until now …never before seen or heard…method of brain rejuvenation..(by the way , this is true )

email me for more information and when I should show up for the classes

bob, the birdie man ( as in golf)

40 Nick July 17, 2008 at 10:25 am

To be mentored and coached by two successful and respected copywriters would be a dream come true for me.I am a retired auto worker for G.M and feel its up to me to become a selfsufficient and self producing individual as the market place changes and at some time G.M may no longer be able to provide for my pension.I have been drawn to and fascinated by ad copy since I was a kid and read all those Melvin Powers and Joe Sugarman ads over and over.I have written them and others by hand for several months as well as some Halbert and the like.I long to be able to do this for a living and help those in need with copy that brings them huge returns oh how cool that would be and I feel confident I can do this! But I thrive best when I can work with mentors and coaches to draw from and get feedback from my efforts and as my resources are somewhat lacking at the moment this would get me into the playing field and on my way.I have never won a contest before and if this were to be the one my gratitude would be beyond expression.To finally work in an area I love would be at last, working for a loving instead of as the past years have been working for a living.As my children are now of college age I could give them the financial support they need as they continue their education.
Thanks for offering a shot at this
Nick

41 Ruth July 17, 2008 at 10:59 am

Ryan and John:
1) Why do I want to write? Because I know I can..I’ve been writing stories and poetry most of my life, but never for $$. Never thought I was good enough…but with proper help, I can be. The letters above overwhelm me, and I believe all of them deserve The
Writer’s Life.
2)How would my life change if I were succesful? I volunteer a lot, so I know the needs out there…to slip $100 in the hand of a sister who can’t afford gasoline for her car, take food to help feed children and homeless
give life and hope to the downtrodden…what more can I say? Happiness to the winning one!

42 DK Fynn July 17, 2008 at 11:32 am

Why I Deserve To Be Free

I don’t know if I can speak for everyone here, but I can say with a degree of certainty that living the life of a freelancer is one monumental step toward freedom, however any of us defines it.

Let me tell you how I define it, and a bit about my story. You’ll soon see why I feel a bit nervous about publically stating some of this, but this contest is
important to me, so I’ll do it anyway.

My name is D.K. Fynn. I currently live in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada.

Ultimately, I believe–actually, I know–that my life purpose is to become a higher consciousness person. “Enlightened,” as some folks would put it.

Becoming financially stable so that I can focus my life moments on the higher issues that matter, instead of working the daily grind is what I need to do to reach this
higher level of consciousness.

So let’s look at me right now, and where I am.

Though I’m home in Ottawa right now, I am a naval reservist, and my duty to my country involves me having to leave my family and go to one of the coasts.

On April 5th, I returned home from being away for over 10 months.

When I left in May 2007, I left little DK and my girlfriend behind. What I remember most was that, the night before I left, little DK and my girlfriend were crying in his room, because little DK didn’t want me to leave.

Let me tell you, going away…leaving your loved ones behind can take a brutal toll on your relationship with them.

I don’t want to get into the details, because it would expose my personal life a bit too much, but in short: I’m not with her anymore, and the relationship I have with
little DK isn’t as close anymore. (A 7 + year relationship…gone.)

I’ve learned that even though serving my country is worthwhile, I would like to spend the greater quantity of time at home, with my loved ones.

So, what makes me a good candidate?

For one, I have a very helping nature. (I think a lot of us do.) I love to help people share their messages and attract people who are right for that message.

Second, I’ve been studying copywriting for over 2 years.

I joined the Copywriter’s Board in December of 2006, and although I haven’t been active recently, I have helped a lot of forum posters with my insightful advice.

I’ve spent a tremendous amount of time reading, writing, listening, and practicing this trade, this profession.

I’ve written a number of articles and a few reports, too.

In fact, now that I think of it, I’ve done almost everything you do, Ryan, except that I haven’t learned how to make an income from it.

Oh…and here’s another thing that makes me a prime candidate: I’m not just a copywriter, I’m an online entreprenuer, too.

That is, I have my own sites (ShortcutFitnessSecrets.com and MortgageAccelerationReport.com), so I have the bigger picture about what it takes to run an online business. With this insight, I can relate to my clients better too, since I’ll be able to identify with the issues of traffic generation and strategy implementation.

How I Intend To Participate

I’ve already started to participate!

As I listed to your second audio, I decided that I’d focus more on the online marketing for now.

Ryan, I think it was you that said that I had to differentiate myself, so you’ll be happy to know that I own the domain name, Web2.0copywriter.com (Actually, the
domain name is 0Copywriter.com, and I put the Web2 in front, since I want to differentiate myself as the Web2.0 Copywriter).

I’ve already written 2 or 3 articles dedicated to people who want to hire online copywriters and marketing consultants. I haven’t typed them yet, but they’re in
my article marketing arsenal.

And yes, I have to admit that I’ve broken one of the cardinal rules of this business: I am writing for free (mind you, I’m a partner on one project). I’ve resolved that this writing-for-free thing will end by the end of summer. I’ll either earn the money I deserve, or leave my partners, my client, and strike out on my own.

So that’s it Ryan, it’s game time. Let’s get this thing goin’.

43 Tom Phelps July 17, 2008 at 12:08 pm

Having purchased your ebook about copywriting, I know that what you teach is solid. I have tried other copywriting courses, only to be extremely displeased with both the content and instruction methods. Though I have secured a few paying clients, I know that my knowledge and skills are still lacking. What they lack is information that can only come from someone with a proven track record of success. Why do I want to “win” this contest? Simply because I always choose to be the best at what I do, and to do so, I need to learn from the best.

Thank you

Tom

44 Kirk Bardsley July 17, 2008 at 12:11 pm

Hi guys, Kirk Bardsley here.

I’m a direct response copywriter and marketing
consultant from over the other side of the pond here in
the UK.

> 1.WHY do you want to become a successful freelance
> copywriter (besides the money)? I’m looking for the
> ultimate reason you got interested in copywriting in
> the first place. What does all that money get you?

To be absolutely honest, I simply drifted into the world
of copywriting when I was a successful eBay
PowerSeller looking to hire a copywriter to write the
sales letter for my front end eBay course.

I made the mistake at the time of looking in places such
as Elance where you’re looking at silly fees such as $500
(or less) for a 12 page letter… yeah right!

It is a mistake getting someone on Elance to write copy,
however, it turned to be a huge turning point for me
when I submitted my first project; I was contacted by
one of the World’s top copywriters (he used to use
Elance for lead generation for his offline $100 a month
Newsletter), who placed a bid of $20,000!

Needless to say, his bid stood out and made me contact
him – to cut a long story short, I took him as my mentor
and discovered I actually had a natural talent to write
my own compelling copy – a talent I now use to charge
an average fee of $500 a page.

Now, the money is great, however, the biggest ‘kick’ I
get is when my copy pulls and makes the sale – after all,
that’s the main purpose of writing the copy, right?

Right!

So yes, the money is great, but it’s only a means to an
end – for me, the lifestyle this business brings is what
it’s really all about. I’m married with two wonderful
children, and I’m delighted to say I’ve been a ‘stay a
home dad’ for the last two and a half years since
starting out in this business.

I make a short 5 meter commute to work whenever I
feel (NOT when someone else tells me to do so), then
leave and play with the kids whenever I wish – I’m in full
control of my life, and I’m loving every minute of
working at home with my supportive, loving and very
happy family who love me being around… unlike other
dads who are away most days!

It’s also very satisfying, giving you a real sense of
purpose when your clients leave glowing testimonials
and comments on how great a copywriter you are… I
genuinely love helping others succeed in obtaining a
better lifestyle.

> 2. HOW will participating in our 6-month Coaching
> Program help you?

I’m looking to join this 6 month caching program to
boost my skills and client base – much of my copy is for
my own products at the moment. I do get the occasional
client who I charge an arm and a leg to write copy for
(and it’s worth every penny to them). Of course I’m
always looking to improve my skills, aren’t we all?

But the big thing, for me, is to have a more consistent
flow of clients to write copy for. and to increase my
reputation – I’m still in my 20s and have time on my
side, however, I want to speed up the process and
become the UK’s answer to Halbert!

You may wonder why I would want to be in such a
coaching group if I’ve already got a mentor?

Well, I’ve had to leave his group due to me not having
enough work to cover his high fees. We still remain
good friends and keep in touch regularly – in fact it’s he who recommended me to have a go at joining this
group.

So, my biggest aim is to bring in more clients to build
my reputation and income to sustain this lifestyle – it’s
my hope to join your coaching group and achieve this
goal… then, leave you with the most glowing
testimonial you could wish for, GUARANTEED!

Thanks for this opportunity.

Kindest regards,

Kirk Bardsley.

45 Mark Steinborn July 17, 2008 at 12:29 pm

WHY: I’ve been working as a freelance copywriter since 1994, and I’ve sold my writing in Europe, Asia and the US. Almost all of my clients have been satisfied. Trouble is, I’m still working a second job as a part-time teacher, sometimes six or seven days a week. And some months I still have to pull money out of savings to cover expenses. I know I’m a good writer, but I’m not connecting with people who recognize it, and are willing to pay for it.

From this course I have two objectives: 1) become a great writer; and 2) learn to attract customers who need, appreciate, and can pay for great writing.

HOW: I’ll reach those goals the same way I tell my students to reach theirs: devote the time and effort to maximize what the profs have to offer. There’s no “magic bullet” to learning, but there are field-tested methods for improving the return on my investment for copywriters. You two guys know those methods.

I have to add, though, that knowing the methods is only half the story. I also need people who know how to teach. I’ve used much of the material on your site. You’ve proven to me that you guys know what you’re doing and how to teach it.

So if you guys are providing the knowledge and the instruction, what will I bring to the table? The same thing that my best students give me: extra effort above and beyond the requirements of the lessons themselves. I want to do more than just master the material; I’d like to profit so much from what you teach that I become the “poster boy” for your course.

46 o k stan July 17, 2008 at 12:46 pm

I am about to collect my first social security check. I have wanted to write for years but “life” sorta got in the way. Now I want to do what I want to do.

Getting paid for it is a bonus – a VERY welcome bonus.

47 Heidi July 17, 2008 at 1:56 pm

Hi everybody,
I am serious about becoming a successful, “booked solid” copywriter and when I started a course last year I did not have a clue what it was all about. I just sort of stombled on it.And I got to like it. This happened after I struggled throuh a 2 year training to be an Intensivecare Nurse and this made me hate learning. I promissed myself never, ever learn anything new in my life again. In the add for the copywriting course they asked: could you write a letter like this? You could make a living with writing letters like this. Writing letters was the thing which I remember as something I liked and the postoffice grow rich bec. of my writing.That how I got to copy writing. Befor I didn`t even know, that there was such a thing as copywriting……
My vision is to become a sought after copywriter here in good old Germany. As I am not that young any more I better hurry up.Thats where I could do with the coaching course so I keep going towards reaching my goal.
I also want to become a copywriting teacher for people like me, who could do with some advice. But:Fist I need the advise myself…
By the way: thanks for the smile on the picture- it is so naturel and encouraging. I have to smile back, whenever I look at it.
Greetins from the far away but good old Germany
Heidi

48 Traci July 17, 2008 at 2:28 pm

1.) How I got into copywriting and why I want to be a copywriter:

My story starts out like many others out there: I wanted to be home with my kids and still make an inome.

I started looking around for writing work on the internet about 6 years ago. I didn’t have kids yet but knew when I did I would be staying home with them. I started out writing articles and web content for a few years. I finally found copywriting and it really interested me. I joined the Warrior Forum and the Copywriters Board and have been lurking around both ever since. I’ve gotten little tips here and there from exceptional copywriters on how to get started, including Ryan’s ebook. I have been following and studying copywriting in all forms for the past 2 years. Direct response has been the most intriguing to me by far. I love the process of writing to a certain audience and actually being able to see that my writing has affected them.

I want to be a copywriter to continue my lifestyle, while allowing my husband a much needed break. I work from my computer about 15-20 hours a week, after the kids go to sleep at night. I want my daytime hours to be spent with my kids and have the luxury to spend those 20 hours a week hard at work for my clients. My husband currently works 7 days a week, 10-12 hours a day with the occasional Sunday off. He is an industrial electrician and works outside most of the time. He makes good money, but at a huge cost to his happiness and time without his family. He provides for us and never complains, saying I do enough just being here with the kids. It broke my heart a few weeks ago when he told me how much it hurts him to miss out on the simple things. Our daughter plays a learning game on t.v. and always talks about it. She made a reference to it and he didn’t know what it was about. I said he was lucky he didn’t have to sit and learn about it at least 2 hours everyday. I teared up with he said he would love to be able to learn it with her, but by the time he has time to, it will probably be too late.

I want to become a successful copywriter to allow my husband the time to become more involved with his family. To allow him the freedom to not have to worry about bills and money and here to enjoy the daily lives of our kids.

2.) How will your 6 month program help me?

Simple. It will open the starting gate for me. I feel I have done enough studying, reading, planning and sitting on the sidelines ‘waiting’ for the right time to begin. (Although I am completely ready to do much more reading, studying and planning to further my career :)) I believe having the two of you as a coach will allow me to see my future in copywriting and provide me the steps I need to really take off. I am treading in uncertainty at the moment. I know I can write well, I know I can become a successful direct response copywriter, I just need an outline on how to get there.

Thank you,

Traci

49 Nicoline July 17, 2008 at 2:54 pm

First of all, I’d like to add my thanks for making this contest opportunity available.

Becoming successful as a freelance copywriter, to my mind, creates a winning situation for everyone involved. It would give me the freedom to be my own boss (with all the accompanying benefits), release me from financial concerns and give me the chance to get paid for doing what I love. That, or course, is writing, and playing with words and getting that inner “yes!” feeling that comes when you know you’ve written a winner.

The other part of the equation is that my clients win too. I get to help them increase their sales, so that they can enjoy all the benefits of what financial success means for them. Even better, supposing that their products and services benefit their clients, then I’m indirectly involved in helping those people improve their lives as well. What more could a person want from a career!?

The Coaching Program sounds like it will give me the missing link I need to move my career forward. I’m one of those people you referenced in the audios, who’s taken copywriting courses but who’s having little success marketing myself. I’ve had a few clients – enough to be sure that I love writing copy and that I this is what I want to do – but I’ve scarcely been able to re-coup the investment I made in the one-on-one coaching programs and courses I took. I know I “should” be making a lot more money, I just don’t know how to get the clients. Plus I could definitely benefit from some instruction on how to talk with clients. And it would be so nice to find out how I can have more leads than I could handle! Hey, then I could refer them to my copywriter friends!

Again thanks for creating this program and for your generosity in allowing one person to attend free of charge.

Best wishes, Nicoline Lentze

50 Bob July 17, 2008 at 6:30 pm

Ryan and John,

Why do I want to become a successful freelance copywriter (besides the money)?

Throughout my life I have had a passion for helping people. Several years ago I realized that I could do this best through my writing. As I have looked at this more closely, I now understand that copywriting offers me the way to help the most people I can. First by writing sales letters and brochures I will be helping those people who hire me. Next – for the people reading my pieces I will be helping them understand how the products and services I am writing about will help make their lives easier, better their relationships or achieve something they always have wanted. Last, copywriting will enable me to give to those less fortunate than me. I am a firm believer that if you give a man a fish, you will feed him for a day. If you teach a man to fish, he can feed himself for a lifetime. Copywriting will provide me the opportunity to teach many how to fish.

How will participating in the 6 month Coaching program help me?

I think John said this best on the audio when he talked about when he entered the real estate profession. He said during the first 6 months, he earned $2,500. Then he found a mentor. I am looking to both of you for mentorship. You have learned how to get prospects, then turn them into leads and turn the leads into clients. On the audios you indicate that you will focus on how you have done this. You also add how you have learned from your mistakes and you will share them with those of us in the program. I plan to model you. That will be the fastest way for me to build my business. The homework assignments will help me follow through on what I am learning. An added bonus that I am looking for is a Master Mind group which will aid us in getting to the next level.

I want to thank both of you for this contest. It has given me the opportunity to really look more closely at the reason I want to be a copywriter and how your program can benefit me.

Bob

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