Common Copywriting Mistake #8: All Promise, No Proof

by Ryan M. Healy on August 23, 2012


It’s easy to make promises.

It’s much harder to back them up.

Said another way, it’s easy to talk the talk, but it’s difficult to walk the walk.

Remember: Whatever promises you make in your sales copy, you need to back them up with proof: facts, figures, testimonials, and whatever else you can bring to bear as you build your sales case.

And how do you come up with good proof?

Good research, of course! (See Copywriting Mistake #1.)

Some of the proof elements I like to use:

  • Quotes and predictions from experts
  • Results of scientific studies
  • Relevant awards or honors
  • Charts and graphs
  • Trust seals

There are dozens of ways to add more proof to your sales messages.

Just be sure your proof equals or surpasses your promises.

-Ryan M. Healy

P.S. Need an ad, sales letter, or autoresponder emails written? Contact me to discuss. Email at rhealy@gmail.com or call 720-344-7788.

About Ryan M. Healy

is a direct response copywriter. Since 2002, he has worked with scores of clients, including BoostCTR, Alex Mandossian, Terry Dean, and Pulte Homes. He writes a popular blog about copywriting, advertising, and business growth, has been featured in publications like Feed Front magazine, and is a regular contributor to WordStream.com, BoostCTR.com, and MarketingForSuccess.com.


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