Even Heroes Need Extra Eyeballs

by Ryan M. Healy on May 26, 2010

I’m reading a great book called Rework by Jason Fried and David Heinemeier Hansson.

Rework is a collection of brief one-page and two-page business lessons. You can plow through five or 10 chapters at a time and feel inspired, stimulated, and rejuvenated. It’s time well spent.

Keep in mind, Fried and Heinemeier are the founders and creators of Basecamp, a project management tool used by millions of people around the world (including me!).

So the business lessons and anecdotes in the book come directly from Fried’s and Heinemeier’s experience building a successful, multi-million dollar business.

What They Say on Page 118

On page 118 begins the chapter titled “Don’t Be a Hero.”

Their premise is simple: When you get stuck, or your unsure of your work, don’t try to be a hero. Get another person’s input instead of trying to muscle your way through it.

“Even heroes need a fresh pair of eyes sometimes — someone else to give them a reality check,” they say.

I agree. That’s one reason I offer copy critiques: So you can get a fresh pair of eyes looking at your work.

Eyeballs for Sale

For the last few months, I’ve been offering to do up to 8 copy critiques at a significant discount. Six of them have been claimed.

In fact, one guy bought a second critique after he saw the results from the first. He writes:

PS – that last copy critique you did for us… We combined your suggestions with a couple minor design tweaks and ended up with a 55% lift in conversion. Nice job :)

Do you have a sales letter or landing page that could use an in-depth critique? Then I invite you to order your copy critique here.

-Ryan M. Healy

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About Ryan M. Healy

is a direct response copywriter. Since 2002, he has worked with scores of clients, including BoostCTR, Alex Mandossian, Terry Dean, and Pulte Homes. He writes a popular blog about copywriting, advertising, and business growth, has been featured in publications like Feed Front magazine, and is a regular contributor to WordStream.com, BoostCTR.com, and MarketingForSuccess.com.


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