3 Easy Ways to Start Writing an Ad

by Ryan M. Healy

in Business, Copywriting, Lessons

In the War of Art, Steven Pressfield writes, “It’s not the writing part that’s hard. What’s hard is sitting down to write.”

And yet, even after sitting down to write an ad or sales letter, you may not know where to start. I want to help you change that starting today.

Now, when writing sales copy, most people start with the headline. Why? Because the headline is the first thing to appear in the copy.

And so the logic goes: Start at the beginning and finish at the end.

There is nothing inherently wrong with this approach. It can work quite well. And yet there are three different approaches I’d like to present for your consideration. Each will give you a clear place to start writing.

Approach #1: Write the Headline First… And Last!

When I was first getting started as a copywriter, I did what most copywriters do: I wrote the headline first. Once it was written, I continued on my way, never to return again.

Unfortunately, this made for some altogether unsatisfactory headlines. After all, I had written it first… and I hadn’t taken the time or effort to revisit it after finishing the copy.

This was a mistake.

To this day, often I will write the headline first. But I won’t spend much time on it. I’ll scribble a few ideas down, pick the one I like best, and move on.

It’s quick and dirty.

From there, I dive into the ad. I craft the opening paragraph; I write the story; I insert the testimonials; I offer proof; I give a deadline; and I ask for the order.

And when I finally reach the end — and I have a complete piece of sales copy — I read the whole thing with the express purpose of finding new copy angles and hooks.

Why do I do this? Because now is the time to return to the headline to strengthen it. I may modify it, rework it, or replace it altogether.

You see, the copy you’ve written inside your ad informs the headline. Which is why you absolutely MUST revisit your headline at the end of your copywriting process.

Approach #2: Write Your Ad Backwards!

If you’d rather put off writing the headline until later, you can write your ad backwards. The way you do this is by writing the order form first.

The reason this is so effective is it forces you to clarify and crystallize your offer before you write the ad or sales letter.

Far too many times, copywriters throw ads together without really knowing what they’re offering. In a very real sense, they’re writing in the dark. How do you write a persuasive ad without knowing what the offer is? You can’t.

When you write the order form, you are working in a limited space — and you must know precisely what the offer is. This is where the offer is boiled down to its essence. The short, compelling copy that’s going to get the prospect to follow-through and place an order.

Write the order form first and you may find that writing your ad or sales letter becomes infinitely easier.

Approach #3: Just Pull the Trigger

When I say “just pull the trigger,” I don’t mean you should start writing willy-nilly. Rather, I’m suggesting you should write your bullets first.

Bullets are where you tease your prospect’s desire into a frenzy. You hint at every little nugget of information — and every benefit, no matter how obscure — your prospect will receive by purchasing your product or service.

Sometimes bullets are “blind” — they suggest an outcome, but don’t reveal how that outcome will be achieved. Other bullets suggest AND reveal at the same time. These are less common, yet highly effective because they subtly allow the prospect to sample your product.

The reason it’s a good idea to write bullets first is because it forces you to uncover every single benefit your product or service delivers.

In other words, you have to cozy up and get intimate with what you’re selling. You’ve got to explore every nook and cranny and pull out things you might not even have been aware of.

The deep exploration required to write bullets gets you right into the heart of your sales copy — and makes all the other words you write flow faster and easier than they would have otherwise.

Furthermore, because of the tight language used in writing bullets, they often make great headlines and subheads. You might even discover the headline of the ad hiding in a bullet, as I have often done.

I sometimes think of bullets as the “body” of the ad. Once the body is in place, all you have to do is put the head on top and slap some feet underneath… and you’re done!

Which Approach Should You Use?

First, let me say there’s really no right or wrong way to write an ad, so long as it produces sales at a profit.

  • Personally, I write bullets first when writing sales copy for an information product. I literally consume the information and write bullets as I go.
  • When I’m selling software or some kind of service, I often write the headline first and last.
  • And when I’m writing a space ad for a magazine or newspaper, I’ll often write the order form first.

So the circumstance often dictates the approach I use. And the same will likely hold true for you.

My advice: Try each approach and see which one suits your style best. And don’t be afraid to mix things up from time to time to fire up your creative juices.

My Best,

-Ryan M. Healy




{ 18 comments }

1 Colin March 26, 2009 at 9:55 am

I find I *have* to write backwards just to get started.

In university, I use to labour for HOURS on the first page of an essay only to delete it and rewrite it…

Now, I find it much more efficient to write the ending of a sales letter… then “think backwards”

2 Ryan M. Healy March 26, 2009 at 10:02 am

@Colin – Sometimes I wonder if it’s just how our brains are wired. To this day, I read magazines from back to front.

3 Colin March 26, 2009 at 10:28 am

Ha Ha Ha —

With magazines, Ryan — ever since I discovered direct response copywriting — I go flip through the mag and go STRAIGHT for the long copy ads first now.

4 John Thomas March 26, 2009 at 10:31 am

Great advice. Thanks.

BTW, love that book by Pressfield. Every (copy)writer should read it and apply it’s lessons.

- John

5 JP Maroney March 26, 2009 at 11:11 am

Ryan,

Great way to lay this stuff out in a straightforward, easy-to-understand format. Useful for ANYONE — even guys who have written a good bit of copy.

Halbert was big on starting with the bullets, huh? Man he could write some sizzlers…

Glad to see ya bloggin regularly again (or perhaps you didn’t stop and I just missed some) :)

Talk soon — your friend,

JP Maroney
aka “Mr. Monetizer”

PS: What plug-in are you using for the “FREE PDF” below the comment form? Neat idea!!!

6 Ryan M. Healy March 26, 2009 at 11:32 am

@Colin – Nice.

@John – Thank you. Yeah, I enjoyed War of Art quite a bit. Only thing I didn’t like was when he got all metaphysical with the muse, Greek gods, etc.

@JP – Great to hear from you! I never stopped blogging… but I’ve heard from a few people they just started getting my emails again after more than 6 months! :-0

Weird.

Anyway, that check box plug-in is called Action Comments. I wrote about on Tuesday here:

http://www.ryanhealy.com/improve-your-blog-3-ways/

It’s an excellent plug-in. I highly recommend it.

Ryan

7 Marya Miller March 26, 2009 at 11:34 am

I write the headlines first and last also. Fun finding out someone else does it this way!

Thanks for the “meaty” article, Ryan.

8 Chad Kettner March 26, 2009 at 1:19 pm

Hey Ryan, great advice. I usually do the headline first and last – but I like your idea for starting with the order form on magazine ads…I tend to get cramped for space and have to re-work everything just to make enough room for a decent explanation of the offer.

9 Ryan M. Healy March 26, 2009 at 3:19 pm

@Marya – You’re welcome!

@Chad – Thanks. Give the “order form” technique a try. I think you’ll like it. Even produces some headline concepts occasionally.

Ryan

10 Courtney March 26, 2009 at 3:42 pm

Incredibly useful advice…

Thank you Ryan. Gary Halbert and John Carlton seemed to be pretty big on writing bullets first. However, I never thought to write the order copy first as well.

I can see how that could eliminate potential problems… before they even arise.

Courtney

11 Teresa March 27, 2009 at 12:05 am

Hey some good thoughts here, I’ve always heard its best to start with the head line but I think that I will start with the order page and see how it works

12 steve prescott March 27, 2009 at 3:43 am

Nice and concise ideas list, Ryan. I do the same with info products: writing the bullets first helps you get every benefit into the copy.

Never tried writing the order form first, though. Will give that a try…

Cheers

Steve

PS
“Sometimes I wonder if it’s just how our brains are wired. To this day, I read magazines from back to front.”— I thought I was the only person to do that!

13 Ryan M. Healy March 27, 2009 at 8:16 am

@Courtney, Teresa, and Steve – The order form is a great place to start because it’s just the facts with some enthusiasm. If you try it, let me know how it works for you.

And Steve: I think the forward/backward thing must be like the difference between being left- or right-handed. If you’re American/English, it’s left to right — but if you’re Hebrew/Japanese, it’s right to left.

Makes me wonder how those conventions ever developed…

Ryan

14 steve prescott March 27, 2009 at 8:28 am

“And Steve: I think the forward/backward thing must be like the difference between being left- or right-handed. If you’re American/English, it’s left to right — but if you’re Hebrew/Japanese, it’s right to left.”

LOL, that cracked me up…

When I was a kid I was ambidextrous… wrote to the middle of the page with my left hand, and then from the middle with my right. Now totally right-handed, though my sister is a pure left-hander. My wife is right-handed, though her sister is a left-hander. And my wife is Japanese, and my kids are… right-handed (so far)… and bilingual, and all musicians and crazy with it…. No wonder I don’t know where to start reading a book…

15 Ryan M. Healy March 27, 2009 at 8:38 am

@Steve – That’s crazy how you used to write! And crazy all the personal details of your life that fit in with what I said. :-)

As far as being ambidextrous, I’m right-handed and throw a ball with my right hand, but I throw a Frisbee primarily with my left hand. It’s the only “sport” where I’m 100% ambidextrous.

Ryan

16 Stephen Dean March 27, 2009 at 4:41 pm

That’s about exactly the way I do it.

I start with the research to find the right appeal.

Bust out bullets to support that appeal.

Write a “place-holder” headline, that gets the idea across, but is far from perfect. Then I also write very rough subheads to outline the copy. Then I fill in the copy in between.

Finally, I rework the deck copy.

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18 Aaron Colby March 28, 2009 at 6:50 am

Great ideas Ryan! For me it’s a great reminder to revisit the headline and that it’s okay to change it. I like creating bullet points and then expanding the ad from that. I find it’s easier to collect my thoughts and organize my ads. Thanks Ryan.

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