After creating a new product and writing a sales letter to sell it, it’s easy to let doubts creep in.

Is this sales letter good enough? you wonder.

You’ve been so close to the project, it’s hard to see your work objectively.

Adding to the tension is your fear of what will happen when you announce your product is for sale. The last thing you want is to be greeted by silence when you launch your product.

Will all that time and effort be wasted?

Obviously, it makes sense to do what you can to ensure your project’s success prior to launch.

One of the most cost-effective ways to do this is to hire another person to critique your sales letter.

A set of fresh eyes will see things you can’t. Feedback from an objective third party will strengthen your offer and save you from the disappointing results you fear.

I just completed a critique earlier this month. After I sent it to my client, he responded, “Ryan – this is great! I really appreciate all your insight. The critique is awesome!”

These types of client responses are common, and they’re a major reason I continue to do critiques.

So, not sure if your sales letter is good enough? Then I strongly encourage you to hire me for a copy critique. You can do so here (first come, first served):

• http://www.ryanhealy.com/copy-critique/

-Ryan M. Healy

P.S. Do you realize how quickly January 1st will arrive? It’s my experience that January is a great sales month. In other words, it’s the perfect time to polish up your sales letter and get it ready to sell.

I look forward to helping you.Similar Posts:

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How the heck does Ben Settle write such witty and entertaining emails every single day?

That’s what I’d ask Ben if I had the chance.

Oh, wait.

I do have the chance.

And so do you. ;-)

For just 2 more days, ask Ben anything you want about copywriting.

And he’ll answer your question!

Want to know his dirty little email secret? Then ask him!

Or even ask him…

• When is it good to lead a sales letter with a story?

• How do you know when you’ve written enough bullets?

• What’s your favorite method for polishing up a sales letter so it sings?

• Are there any words you avoid when writing copy? Or any words you intentionally use? Why?

• Do you adapt your writing voice to the market… or do you just write for markets where your voice is a natural fit? Why?

I could come up with questions all day long.

But it’d be WAY more fun if you helped me out with a few questions of your own.

So: Submit your questions for Ben in the comments section here….

http://www.ryanhealy.com/get-your-copywriting-questions-answered/

Thanks,

-Ryan M. Healy

P.S. This is not an opportunity to get a critique of your sales page, so please avoid asking for feedback on copy you’ve written.Similar Posts:

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Happy Valentine’s Day!

Since my wife and kids are sick today — bad coughs because of some respiratory bug — there won’t be a lot of romance going on here today.

But I’m not going to let that stop me from cuddling up by the fire with another sales letter… maybe yours!

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I’m looking for a hot date with an ugly sales letter! Can
you help? >>> http://www.ryanhealy.com/copy-critique
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As you may recall, I’m currently offering 8 copy critiques at 40% off the regular price. You pay only $300 for your copy critique.

Just yesterday I finished the first critique. He ordered it on Feb 8 and I finished it on Feb 13, well under my 14-day turn-around guarantee.

Here are some relevant stats:

• I inserted 18 comments right into his sales letter pointing out trouble spots and areas for improvement.

• I wrote 2 new headlines for potential testing.

• Plus, I wrote 1,397 words — 5 pages! — of feedback that was sent in a separate document. (The sales letter was 2,512 words, including testimonials. I wrote more than HALF that in feedback.)

Of course, I can’t guarantee a certain number of comments or headlines or pages when I do your critique.

But I can guarantee I will give you my best suggestions to strengthen your copy so you get more sales.

So what do you say?

For only $300 I’ll get all cozy with your sales letter and show you exactly what changes to make so you can romance more sales out of it.

Click here to order your copy critique.

-Ryan M. HealySimilar Posts:

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One reason I wrote The Eight-Month Letter was this: it is much harder to persuade a person to a new belief than it is to get them to part with money. This is because we value our beliefs much more than we value money. In that respect, writing the letter was a monumental challenge for me. I asked myself, “How can I communicate in such a way that a person would reconsider their core spiritual beliefs? How can I do it so they will adopt new beliefs contrary to their old ones?”

As I wrote the letter, I re-learned a few lessons about copywriting. These are lessons I already “knew,” but hadn’t deeply absorbed. I’d like to share these copywriting lessons with you.

Lesson #1: Your tone matters.

I completed the first draft of “The Eight-Month Letter” in the summer of 2007. I thought I had really nailed it. So I began to share it with some close friends and family members. I wanted to get their feedback.

Guess what?

The response was nothing like I expected. One person said it was succinct and well-written, but didn’t say much beyond that. Another close friend literally ripped the letter to shreds. After he was done telling me all the things he didn’t like, I asked him what he liked about. He said, “Nothing! I don’t like anything about it!”

Whoa. I’ve got thick skin. But that comment really hurt, especially coming from a friend.

After that conversation, I had to put the project on hold. Not only did I need some time to process my emotions, I also needed time to reflect to see if what my friend had said was true.

Ultimately, I concluded my friend was right. The tone of my letter was all wrong. It had been written in a spirit of aggression rather than a spirit of love.

This is one reason it took me months to rewrite the letter. I had to get the tone right. I had to find the right voice. And now, looking back at the old version, I’d be embarrassed to show it to anybody. So I’m glad my friend called me to account, even though it hurt at the time. It forced me to focus on a single issue for months: saying the right things in the right way for maximum effectiveness.

Lesson #2: It’s not a sales letter; it’s a legal case.

Time and time again, I’ve heard about the importance of proof in making the sale. I totally agree with this. It is not wise to stop with testimonials. You also want screenshots, videos, credentials, etc. Whatever you can present to support your claims should be presented.

It’s one thing to preach the importance of proof; it is quite another to view your entire sales letter as a legal case.

This is the shift in perception that happened to me as I wrote “The Eight-Month Letter.” I realized I couldn’t toss everything together willy-nilly like a 10-minute meal. Rather, I had to methodically present the evidence in a logical sequence such that the “jury” (my readers) would issue the verdict I wanted.

How does a court case work?

Loosely speaking, you first introduce the problem. (What crime has been committed? What wrong needs to be rectified?) You then present your case, including all the evidence and a proposed solution to the problem. The defense then presents their case, which includes all the objections. You address those objections with all the possible evidence, logic, and emotional appeal you can use.

In the end, you hope the outcome (verdict) of your case is that your audience (the jury) takes the action you’ve prescribed, whether it be signing up to a list, buying a product or service, or requesting more information.

So why should you view a sales letter as the proceedings of a court case?

Simple. It takes the focus off of the promise you’re making, reduces hype, and refocuses your attention on the structure of the case and the evidence you present. Not that you should spend less time on crafting the promise of a letter. The promise you make and how you get attention is critical. But it’s far too easy to overlook the importance of how your letter is structured and how the evidence is presented. These greatly influence the success of a sales letter.

Said another way, where there is a sloppy letter and a paucity of evidence, you will not get the verdict you desire.

Lesson #3: Spend time away from your letter after you’ve written it.

Most of the projects I write for clients involve fairly tight deadlines. Rare is the client who calls me with a two- or three-month lead time. Usually, the client wants the copy ASAP, but no later than some date three weeks away.

I won’t say this is a recipe for bad copy, but working on an extremely short deadline has the potential to produce copy that is not as strong as it could be.

I view the writing of a sales letter in three stages:

1. Research
2. Writing
3. Editing

I feel it’s imperative to have “down time” between each of these stages. One day at least. Preferably, two or three days between research and writing; and another three or four days between writing and editing.

Why do I say this?

One, because after digesting a large amount of information, your brain (particularly your subconscious mind) needs time to process. Lacking time, you will probably struggle to come up with the hook. But give your brain some rest and the ideas will begin to flow effortlessly.

The same principle applies to the the time you should give yourself between writing and editing. After writing a letter, you will often be too involved to see anything objectively. You need time away to pull your mind back… to quite literally forget what you’ve written.

After you’ve had time away from what you’ve written, you’ll be able to see the copy with “fresh eyes.” You’ll quickly and easily be able to spot errors, weak sections, bad transitions, and more.

Lacking this time away from your copy, you might end up calling a colleague in a panic because you “can’t see the forest for the trees.” You might need somebody else’s eyes because yours are too tired–and you haven’t given them any time to rest. Sound familiar?

Obviously, since “The Eight-Month Letter” had no deadline, I was able to spend a lot of time away from it between rounds of editing. After a month or longer away from the letter, I was amazed by the holes in the letter that all of a sudden seemed so “glaringly obvious.” If I had not spent time away from the letter, I would probably have never seen these holes.

Wrapping Up…

Of course, if you read “The Eight-Month Letter,” I hope you got some value out of it. But if you didn’t, I hope these copywriting lessons I’ve shared here will be of value to you and your business. I figure, at the very least, you can benefit from the lessons I re-learned through the writing of that letter.

So the next time you’re faced with a copy project, remember these three things: find the right tone; build your letter like you would a legal case; and give yourself sufficient time between each stage of the copywriting process. Your bottom line will thank you.

-Ryan M. Healy

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