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		<title>By: dhanediesil</title>
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		<dc:creator>dhanediesil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Oct 2009 15:29:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree! &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Reading things out loud after you&#039;ve wrote them helps you determine whether or not what you&#039;re saying would sound right to the person reading. &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;It&#039;s amazing what we can think of at time, but it can sometimes be counter productive to our goals.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree! </p>
<p>Reading things out loud after you&#39;ve wrote them helps you determine whether or not what you&#39;re saying would sound right to the person reading. </p>
<p>It&#39;s amazing what we can think of at time, but it can sometimes be counter productive to our goals.</p>
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		<title>By: Laura</title>
		<link>http://www.ryanhealy.com/the-best-editing-technique/comment-page-1/#comment-5340</link>
		<dc:creator>Laura</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2009 23:24:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Is there some way you can get the writers and editors who work for yahoo to follow this advice? Every day they make some of the most egregious mistakes perpetrated on the public -- most of which would be caught by a careful proofread. Check out http://terriblywrite.wordpress.com for a few thousand examples.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Is there some way you can get the writers and editors who work for yahoo to follow this advice? Every day they make some of the most egregious mistakes perpetrated on the public &#8212; most of which would be caught by a careful proofread. Check out <a href="http://terriblywrite.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">http://terriblywrite.wordpress.com</a> for a few thousand examples.</p>
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		<title>By: Michael Beck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael Beck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2009 16:40:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m sort of refocusing on the &quot;grammar&quot; area myself. I used to be of the camp that believes &quot;it&#039;s not how well it pleases your English teacher but how it resonates with your target audience.&quot;

Then I realized that misspellings are one thing, but bad grammar can totally take your meaning and destroy it. Plus, it&#039;s helpful to review since we&#039;ll be teaching it to our homeschooled kids soon. So it&#039;s back to grammar school for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m sort of refocusing on the &#8220;grammar&#8221; area myself. I used to be of the camp that believes &#8220;it&#8217;s not how well it pleases your English teacher but how it resonates with your target audience.&#8221;</p>
<p>Then I realized that misspellings are one thing, but bad grammar can totally take your meaning and destroy it. Plus, it&#8217;s helpful to review since we&#8217;ll be teaching it to our homeschooled kids soon. So it&#8217;s back to grammar school for me.</p>
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		<title>By: Carl Davison</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carl Davison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2009 00:10:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ryan,

It&#039;s my first time here (found you on Twitter), nice blog!

I&#039;m a student of copywriting and I mainly do it for free to help friends (for now).   

I believe that after you&#039;ve become 1000% intimate with a product or service and then set the intention to write great copy, you engage the Infinite Intelligence (yep, from Think and Grow Rich by Napoleon Hill).

One thing I do is walk away from it for a day or two, then come back and try to read it fresh (pretending this is the first time). I may do this several times. 

I find that getting away from it for a while and allowing the subconscious to work on it while I do other things is highly beneficial. Many times, I get an A-Ha! moment out of the blue. 

Also, since I am always reading wonderful blogs (like this one) as well as mini-sites, reading books and collecting things for my swipe file...I tend to come across ideas and other things that help (like reading it aloud ...and 10 times...Thanks Ryan and Ben!).

I love to get that feeling: &quot;this is cool!&quot; -when I find something really helpful. 

Which I&#039;m feeling right now...!
;-)
Carl

P.S. -LOVE the check boxes and capture for .pdf you are using here, very innovative haven&#039;t seen this before...new trick...lol...happy dance...w00t!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ryan,</p>
<p>It&#8217;s my first time here (found you on Twitter), nice blog!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m a student of copywriting and I mainly do it for free to help friends (for now).   </p>
<p>I believe that after you&#8217;ve become 1000% intimate with a product or service and then set the intention to write great copy, you engage the Infinite Intelligence (yep, from Think and Grow Rich by Napoleon Hill).</p>
<p>One thing I do is walk away from it for a day or two, then come back and try to read it fresh (pretending this is the first time). I may do this several times. </p>
<p>I find that getting away from it for a while and allowing the subconscious to work on it while I do other things is highly beneficial. Many times, I get an A-Ha! moment out of the blue. </p>
<p>Also, since I am always reading wonderful blogs (like this one) as well as mini-sites, reading books and collecting things for my swipe file&#8230;I tend to come across ideas and other things that help (like reading it aloud &#8230;and 10 times&#8230;Thanks Ryan and Ben!).</p>
<p>I love to get that feeling: &#8220;this is cool!&#8221; -when I find something really helpful. </p>
<p>Which I&#8217;m feeling right now&#8230;!<br />
;-)<br />
Carl</p>
<p>P.S. -LOVE the check boxes and capture for .pdf you are using here, very innovative haven&#8217;t seen this before&#8230;new trick&#8230;lol&#8230;happy dance&#8230;w00t!</p>
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		<title>By: Ryan M. Healy</title>
		<link>http://www.ryanhealy.com/the-best-editing-technique/comment-page-1/#comment-5323</link>
		<dc:creator>Ryan M. Healy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 22:09:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the excellent comments!

@Ben - That&#039;s what I love about you. You have the ability to stick to something far longer than your average dude or dudette.

It&#039;s also what makes your copy outshine your peers. :-)

Ryan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the excellent comments!</p>
<p>@Ben &#8211; That&#8217;s what I love about you. You have the ability to stick to something far longer than your average dude or dudette.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s also what makes your copy outshine your peers. :-)</p>
<p>Ryan</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Settle</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben Settle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 21:15:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Ryan, 

I&#039;ll take it even another step further (actually 10 steps further) : 

Read it aloud 10 times -- spaced out over 4 or 5  days (if possible). 

Yes, it&#039;s boring, it&#039;s redundant and it WILL drive your spouse bonkers.

BUT... I promise you will not only catch many more errors and mistakes, but you will also get many more ideas for your ad as you do it.

In fact (and I do not know if this will be the case with everyone) the ad I read aloud the first time is often far weaker than the one I read aloud the 5th, 6th or 10th time.  Sometimes it&#039;s almost a completely different ads, with more meat, benefits and persuasive elements in it that come out of nowhere later in the process.

Just my 10 cents...

Ben</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Ryan, </p>
<p>I&#8217;ll take it even another step further (actually 10 steps further) : </p>
<p>Read it aloud 10 times &#8212; spaced out over 4 or 5  days (if possible). </p>
<p>Yes, it&#8217;s boring, it&#8217;s redundant and it WILL drive your spouse bonkers.</p>
<p>BUT&#8230; I promise you will not only catch many more errors and mistakes, but you will also get many more ideas for your ad as you do it.</p>
<p>In fact (and I do not know if this will be the case with everyone) the ad I read aloud the first time is often far weaker than the one I read aloud the 5th, 6th or 10th time.  Sometimes it&#8217;s almost a completely different ads, with more meat, benefits and persuasive elements in it that come out of nowhere later in the process.</p>
<p>Just my 10 cents&#8230;</p>
<p>Ben</p>
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		<title>By: Diana Cacy Hawkins</title>
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		<dc:creator>Diana Cacy Hawkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 19:10:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have two main proofing passes I do. Read out loud like this, and another where I change the type to a different font and read through the printed copy.  Helps things pop out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have two main proofing passes I do. Read out loud like this, and another where I change the type to a different font and read through the printed copy.  Helps things pop out.</p>
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		<title>By: Ricky Breslin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ricky Breslin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 18:54:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve been doing what you&#039;ve just outlined for awhile. It works GREAT to. I ALWAYS catch something wrong with my copy when I read it out loud. Good post today, simple and to the point!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve been doing what you&#8217;ve just outlined for awhile. It works GREAT to. I ALWAYS catch something wrong with my copy when I read it out loud. Good post today, simple and to the point!</p>
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		<title>By: sheriff</title>
		<link>http://www.ryanhealy.com/the-best-editing-technique/comment-page-1/#comment-5319</link>
		<dc:creator>sheriff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 18:45:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s a pretty good tip.  I&#039;ve used it in the past and it worked very well for me.  I should do this all the time.

Thanks a lot for the tip.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s a pretty good tip.  I&#8217;ve used it in the past and it worked very well for me.  I should do this all the time.</p>
<p>Thanks a lot for the tip.</p>
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		<title>By: John Thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jun 2009 17:23:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent practical advice.

Thanks, Ryan.

- John</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent practical advice.</p>
<p>Thanks, Ryan.</p>
<p>- John</p>
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