We’re #1 for a Reason!

by Ryan M. Healy

in Copywriting, Examples

Seen on a door hanger advertising a lawn care company:

“We’re #1 for a reason”

Unfortunately, not one reason was given.




{ 5 comments }

1 Ricky Breslin March 9, 2008 at 7:02 pm

Good stuff Ryan, straight to the point! :-)

2 Ryan M. Healy March 10, 2008 at 1:46 pm

Thanks, Ricky!

I like to write a short post every now and again.

There’s power in brevity. ;-)

3 Ed Anderson March 13, 2008 at 8:53 am

Hi Ryan,
We’re all number one at something. Unfortunately, the somethings are not always good. They weren’t number one at writing ad copy for sure.

Ed Anderson
http://www.masteringyourquest.com
http://www.edcanderson.com

4 Walt Goshert March 19, 2008 at 7:33 pm

Ryan,

“We’re #1 for a reason!”

Or…

“We’re #1 for a reason?”

Not that it makes much difference…

5 Ryan M. Healy March 20, 2008 at 7:47 am

Ed – I imagine they’re number one at lawn care, although they did a horrible job of proving it.

Walt – LOL! :-)

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